|Reviews for Alternative: Academy Duelist|
| AllenAndArth chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
Name: Kuroi Tay
Religion:Atheist - too toublesome to have one...
Gender:male/Looks completely like a girl(remember kishimoto saying that haku is a guy...well in your fic he's a girl...but yeah tay is like kishimoto's haku)
Power: you can decide...just do something discret...he dosen't like to stand out; pehaps something mind related
Back story: Tay's family have always been an ally from kaiba corps, ever since the birth of the company; his parents worked at the research division, Tay's personality is a mix of kakashi's personality (and late quirks, with lame excuses and icha icha if possible!), shikamaru's laziness(he like's clouds as well), hibari kyouya's way of helping people and kushina's stuborness, and he also love's to mind fuck his enemys (and friends) while he stays in his itachi's mode(completly stoic, no emotions); a natural genius, but, one that hate's to stand out; Tay dosen't have lot's of motivations, he's at the academia because his godfather Mokuba(yeah, kaiba's little bro!if i can, if not just put some OC from kaiba corps) forced him, beacuse his parent's died...3 weeks before he entered the academia.
Animal Affinity: dire wolf
Alignment:his friends and people who needs help(even if he tells everyone that they're problematic).
Handicaps/disabilities if they have them: he's not good with crowds...no scratch that people in general;complete lack of energy and he fears people hating his never get where he has to be on time, if it's not important.
Extra info: he;s that kind of person that always say "Like hell I will do something so troublesome" or "man you guys can't ever stay out of trouble" or "i hate to keep bailing out you guys out of trouble every time" or "i hate this" or "i got lost at the road of life...", but still goes until hell itself to helps his friends.
He's hated by his brothers/sisters; because he remained stoic and unaffected when their parent's and grandfather/mother died, he didin't even mourn them( in front of the family, he knew his older brother and sister were going to put that being strong act, so before they did that, he did it for them)
Family members: parent's and grandfather(grandmother too) dead, two older brothers twins( yume and Akiba) and two younger brothers( arashi and keiichi) and a younger sister( kushina...beacuse i love the name *0*)
Affiliation: Obelisk blue
deck: Vilian deck, he normally uses any monster or card that can give him advantage, even if it looks like a cheap trick, he likes that using cheap tricks on very complicated strategies
effect: enables one monster to attack the other player(the monster attack get's cut by half)
effect: the player can take two card from his cemitery and place on his hand as long as they're magics)
Effect: by putting 3 cards from your hand to the cemitery you can block one enemy attack
Effect: every time dark vampire causes direct damage to the oponent his owner get's half of the damage in life points
| AllenAndArth chapter 3 . 11/20/2012
your just making a copy and putting Jr. in front of naruto's name...
make it different or i dosen't have any meaning
| GelelNinja7 chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
I like your new version of the story so far, and look forward to the next few chapters. Here is my OC if you like him.
Name: Jei or 'Jay'
Year: First Year
Back Story: Grew up in a large family. Not used to hard work. Went to Duel Academy to escape his family. Duels for fun. Laid-back. Favorite colors are green and black. Is straight but develops a gay crush on Naruto (Wants to get a threesome with him and another chick).
Clothes: Always wears a winter cap on his head, no matter the Tempeture or situation.
Animal Affinity: Bats, "Cause they're cool and can just hang around"
Handicaps: Requires Glassess
Deck: Avenger Deck
Primarily Light and Earth attribute Monsters. Uses low level Beast and Winged Beast Monsters early on, then summons High-Level Avenger Monsters that have effect the depend on the specific Monsters in his graveyard. His Deck's weakness is card banishment effects and his Monster's low ATK and DEF scores.
When this Monster is destroyed by Battle, target 1 monster on the field, and change it to face-up DEF position. As long as Black Bat is in the graveyard, the Monster cannot change it's Battle Position
HOODED AVENGER (His Trump Card)
You may Special Summon this card from your hand by Tributing 3 Set Spell or Trap cards on your side of the field. This card gains 200 ATK for every Level 2 or lower Monster in your Graveyard.
Fusion summon this card with any four Level 2 or lower Beast or Winged-Beast Monsters you control. You Tribute this card to destroy 1 Monster on the field whose total Levels are equal to or greater than the total level of all Monsters in your Graveyard.
| Artemis-Ikana chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
If your looking for characters still...
Name: Artemis Trintes
Religion: Atheist-hates the devout-hates gods in all forms including the god cards and Exodia.
Gender: male-vaguely androgynous appearance at a distance-
Powers: up to you as long as it's not incredibly stupid.
Back story: his parents died young, he was raised by the family maids, Asashina Youri, Isira Yamaki, and Artrenis Rastof, developing a kind if distant personality and taking the maids humility to heart. He is a sad and lonely teen, wants friends, and lacks a distinct sense of right and wrong due to being raised by only a group of maids who cared for teaching him hygiene and self care more than ethics.
Animal Affinity: cats of all sorts
Alignment: himself(save for his friends)
Handicaps/Disabilities: SEVERE phobia of being rejected(he was an outcast at his previous school as the weird/too mature child with dead parents)
Intense rage when people insult his family or his intelligence, to the point he will arrange to attack them in their sleep if he has to to teach them the error of their ways.
Family Members- all deceased, mother owned a productive and lucrative company which is now run by a stand-in until Artemis takes the reigns.
Other Members- none-deceased.
Affiliation: his friends
Deck: passive-reactive using effects traps magic and others to counter opponents, before viciously pressing any advantage, using little-or-unknown cat themed cards, his dual spirit (should you give him one) is the Cheshire-Cat (Yes from Alice in Wonderland), a weak but powerfully reactive effect monster card. (Specifics up to you of course.)
If not just let me know, Thank you for more great stories!
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
If your still looking for OC's I have one.
Name: Godai(surname) Takumi(First name)
Age; 16 (can be upped or downed if you wish)
Powers: control over basic elements, flight, higher than average strength, uses three red bird medals to gain Phoenix like armor
Back story (Their motivations, personality, and history)
Animal Affinity: Phoenix(Mainly)
Extra Info: Optional but helps.
Parents-Godai Yuuskei, Godai Runi
Affiliation: Osiris Red
Deck: Deck comprised mostly of winged beasts, with the strongest and best monster being the Xyz(Exceed) Monster known as Void Phoenix(Can be changed to a fusion if wished.) Said Void Phoenix has 3500 ATK and 2800 DEF and has a Rank of 7(Needs 2 level 7 monsters for summoning, unless change for a fusion it needs two winged beast monsters), and is a black and red phoenix. Effect can be what ever you want since I haven't compeletly finished my own version of the card as I'm still drawing it up.
PM me if you need anything.
| XIII-Kuro Neko chapter 3 . 9/10/2011
I didnt even Know yugioh gx had a manga thats interesting to fuse both the anime and manga that i wanna see more of
| deltabeta26 chapter 3 . 9/10/2011
Errr. . . .Does that author note hold true for this story as well?
| The Lord of Shadow chapter 3 . 9/9/2011
i think he (naruto) should have like a 'nine tailed fox' card or some shit like thatbut thats just my opinion
| Blackholelord chapter 2 . 8/23/2011
Not sure how to review this story, the chapters seem to need a little more filling into them. I have seen many story of Yu-Gi-Oh, some are good, but others need work. As for the names being in Japanese originality, well I'm not sure, I watched this series in English, and I am betting so did a lot of the other readers.
| deltabeta26 chapter 2 . 8/22/2011
While I would love to talk a lot about how much I loved the humor and things like that I think I pretty much had that covered when I review the chapter back when it was in your other story. I like the chapter, believe me I do. But there are some things I don't really like. Like how you used what looks like the exact same chapter. If this is a different person shouldn't he at least act like it? I can understand similar personalities what with this Naruto being Naruto Sr's son but word for word and action for action seems a little much. So I have to ask, will there be a rewrite later when you have time to make these chapters different than your other story?
Other than that thing that has been bugging me, I really do like the chapter.
| Jacob shives chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
This is pretty amazing, your originality always shines Thouge.
| alchemists19 chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
lets see what happen next
| Kaijukage Master of the Uzuton chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
Sweet to tell the truth I always was a tad uncomfertable with your fics always being conmected but I do suggest looking through the chapters for your alt fics a tad more throughly I caught a couple of things that were from the unleashed one that don't fit like when chazz is informing his lackeys of who naruto jr. Is naruto and srry about any typos I'm using my phone I hope to see the next chapter soon peace out for now.
| deltabeta26 chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
This is actually a pretty cool idea, kinda like a story who's purpose is to test your writing ability because this time around you will have to work with no background. It is also something to target people who don't like your unleashed series with as now Naruto isn't what some seem to think is "stupidly powerful". This first chapter is much like your unleashed version but I would really like to see the bigger differences between the two stories as this one develops more.
| Randz Kitsu chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
ano.. Can you me tell the difference of this fic with your another one exept for background character and *maybe* the flow of duel?be* the flow of duel?