Reviews for Love on the Run
Renu chapter 5 . 11/3/2011
great fanfic can't wait for a new one
Miss Darkmoon chapter 5 . 10/31/2011
This is just stunning. Like... your characterization, Jennifer's story, Jennifer saying Needy's first time in the ass will be romantic and them being totally serious about that conversation... You're just amazing at taking characters from existing works and expanding them, which I think is the essential goal of fan fiction, really.

Jennifer screaming for Needy worked for me here, which is great, because many stories where one character wakes screaming don't have the drama to pull it off, but this does. And needing to hear Needy's heartbeat to sleep was sweet, and I loved dealing with that through an app XD Also, finding out about how Needy left home was cool (assuming we hadn't heard that already and I'd just forgotten).

Thanks for the amazing ride; I look forward to more of your fiction!


Mya chapter 5 . 10/31/2011
Loved it! Needy's mom refusing to let her go was hilarious. The rumor mill was awesome! Alien sex-pollen? Does that make you sneeze?

Just the right ending for a great story!
IxHeartxGlee chapter 5 . 10/18/2011
Great epilogue. It had just the right ending. Much better than the movie. :)

Thanks for sharing!
Ryoko05 chapter 5 . 10/18/2011
Loved it! The part about Needy's mom not letting her go made me laugh out loud. Thanks for the fic and for finishing!
Virgoincarnate chapter 5 . 10/18/2011
I sincerely loved this story. The characterization was excellent and the plot was cool and- WHY COULDN'T THE MOVIE HAVE ENDED LIKE THIS? *coughhackweeze* ...Sorry 'bout that. Anyway, I really do love this story. It was cute, sexy, trippy, and somehow managed to tug at your heart just a bit at all the right moments all at once.
1010'jin chapter 5 . 10/18/2011
Ahaha-the last line was fantastic. Sure they'd gone through hell, but they stuck it through and made it out together. :D
LP chapter 5 . 10/18/2011
Nice story, thanks for sharing.
List of Romantics chapter 5 . 10/18/2011
Thank you for reminding me that your writing is "NSFW" or public reading as it tends to leave me more than a bit randy. Mercy! But on a more serious note, your talent for weaving the slutty and smutty with the heart-felt and tender is truly a gift. I can't remember the last time I read a story that both charmed my inner romantic while spanking the perv deep in my soul like some naughty schoolgirl! How wonderful!

"and another rumor – probably started by a boy – had them driving to California to make lesbian porn."

You, sir, are a genius. I like the way you think ;3

"Needy stated firmly while Jennifer was still being ruled by her brain instead of her cunt."

Guilty. LOL! I am so guilty of cunt-pwnage.

"I swear, I'll make your first time up the ass really romantic. You'll want me sticking things up there all the time afterwards."

Romantic? I don't think Hallmark makes a card for that. LOL! Just remember: keep it lubed and keep it clean.
Avarenda chapter 5 . 10/18/2011
Aww, happy ending. Thanks so much for taking the time to write this. Everything you do is gold, but its still pretty awesome.
MaxximumRide666 chapter 5 . 10/18/2011
Absolutely amazing story, dude. Loved every second of it. Needy and Jennifer are so great together, they just really work.

Beautifully written, my friend, you're definitely one of my favourite writers ) keep it up.
Mya chapter 4 . 10/11/2011
Wow, didn't expect the ritual to work so smoothly. Hope Jen doesn't go insane with the guilt/knowledge over what she did while possessed.
anon chapter 4 . 9/30/2011
I love it. Please do continue :D
Tvat chapter 4 . 9/28/2011
Really interesting, looking forward to see where you take this. Excellent writing.
Miss Darkmoon chapter 4 . 9/25/2011

This story is just... consistently fantastic. Like really. The portrayal of Jennifer and Needy is just... raw, and honest, and you treat the characters so much more fairly than the film did. I'm so happy you're writing this, and I can't wait to read more of it :D
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