Reviews for Sometimes You Have to Pay
Guest chapter 8 . 8/18
Your story is amazing, smart and oh so very lovely!
The idea of Peter proposing Neal to tell a story is ...brilliant!
thank you so much!
Marty chapter 8 . 11/13/2016
Hey,

I just wanted to say that last sentence was really heart-warming . . . Such a Goode ending!

-Marty
MargaritaS chapter 8 . 5/13/2016
i like this version of possibilities :)
ClaMiAl chapter 8 . 2/14/2013
Nice! Poor Neil getting shot, but I liked Nick and Petey's reconciliation.
asecretmakesawomanwoman chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
What a fairy tale!
the letter is really sooo mozzie. could hear his voice reading it.
Neal asking if he confessed anything was just..they should adapt it in the
show ;) after they ask you for premission, of course. ;)
Good work!
wotumba1 chapter 8 . 11/6/2012
glad that even mozzie seems to be heading home...
and i agree, the dreams of all of them changed over the time. could say that's a good thing...
wotumba1 chapter 7 . 11/6/2012
gotta love the fairy tale here!
wotumba1 chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
wow what a start! even though i already watched the ep, i'm soooo curious to find out how you saw things...
Ruriko3 chapter 7 . 10/5/2012
I liked the story :) It was really touching and more importantly, I think that aside from capturing Neal's youth, it reveals the good man he really is under the con.
BlueDiamondStar chapter 8 . 9/10/2012
OMG terribly awesome story here. The ending melt my heart completely
hannahsmetana chapter 8 . 8/31/2012
A very pleasing resolution to the whole treasure fiasco, well played :)
Leesa Perrie chapter 8 . 8/11/2012
This was a fun ride, with lots of twists and turns!

This bit made me smile a lot:
"Well, they've got you on some pretty good drugs."
"Have I confessed to anything?"

That's just such a Neal response! :)
CaskettLover1969 chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
What a wonderful story, I loved it so much, thank you very much!

Keep writing stories, they are some of the best!
cmtaylor531 chapter 8 . 1/25/2012
NIck petey and dante thing was cracking me up. Loved it.
HilsonMarvey27 chapter 8 . 1/15/2012
This is definitely the BEST post-Countdown story out there. (I've been trying to read them all in preparation for the return which at this point is in 2 days! Anyway, I LOVE your writing! You're a great author and I can't wait for your next fanfiction!
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