Reviews for Shades of Twilight
WyldClaw chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
where did the mirror take twilight
RedVsBlue327 chapter 3 . 9/26/2011
Twilights overlooked Applejacks stubborness, not to mention her being one of the shown off mares. This should be intresting.

Another good chapter to read. I got abit confused at the major magic use in the Everfree forest scene, but I'm sure it's more just me. Nice analyzing with Twilight's contact choices in a situation like that. I'm ecstatic to see how the conversation with Applejack goes. I honestly don't think Twilight will get much success, but to prove she's telling the truth, she can always play the "Surprising amount of knowledge on Applejacks life dispite the little to no contact" card.

Regardless on how it goes, I can't wait to see how the rest unfolds. (I sounded abit like Zecora there :D )

xXx575ZiMgArFiElD4eVeRxXx chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
AN OKAY ATTEMPT BUT AS A TIME-TRAVEL STORY THIS HAS A LOT OF FLAWS. IVE ONLY SEEN A FEW EPISODES BUT I'M PRETTY SURE YOU HAVE TRIXIE AND TWILIGHT SPARKLE MIXED UP, IT'S OKAY IT HAPPENS.

4/10 FOR RIPPING OFF BACK TO THE FUTURE.
JuMiKu chapter 3 . 9/23/2011
Poor Twilight. Being rejected by a (n alternate) friend is awful.
JuMiKu chapter 2 . 8/20/2011
A nice idea. I'll keep an eye on this.
RedVsBlue327 chapter 2 . 8/19/2011
And I was right .! (And thank Celestia it wasn't an evil parrallel universe like I was thinking)

Instead of a complete role swap like I expected at the beggining of this chapter, you made things extra intresting by keeping "The Great and Wise" Twilight the more powerful unicorn, as well as letting her have Spike (Poor Spike. Part of me is gonna hate seeing what he goes through in this universe). Now I have even more reason to keep reading!

I'm curious to something though, is the Trixie from this universe the Element of Magic? Or were the rest of the Elements good enough to defeat Nightmare Moon? Or is all of this Irrelevent and were going to pretend none of that happened?

Anyway, I like your idea of 3K word chapters. It sounds reasonable.

Take your time but update soon!
RedVsBlue327 chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
What just happened? *Ping* Hey is it an parallel universe! (Theres a difference between alternate and parallel universes!) Thats one of my "fanfiction dreams"!

But really, what happened to Twilight? She goes through the everfree in the middle of the night, and gets sucked into a mirror. Thats not... creepy at all.

Anyway, I Really can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Honestly theres not much I can say right now thats unique for this story, but seeing how the chapter ended, I'll have alot to say for the next!

Take your time but update soon!
Castitas chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
There's one thing I hate more than horrible stories, and that's good stories with a cliffhanger.
obscure999 chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
A good first chapter, spelling and grammatical errors seem to have being kept to a minimum, and I hope you decide to develop this further.