|Reviews for Ichi, Ni, San|
| claraowl chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
Besides the occasional forgotten apostrophe, it was good!
I really felt for Rima in this story.
| otakuLALA chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
Lola: OH! IT'S SO SAD~ TTTT
Luna: Even I nearly cried :(
Lala *dabbing eyes with tissue* It's still a great story, though.
Blake: Rima needs a hug. Nagi! YOU KNOW WHAT TO DO!
| Hazey Rine chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
this is fairly good and reminds me of my own writing style haha
anyways, i have no criticism to give you other than the slight lack of detail! it would have been nicer but you portrayed her feelings well :)
i'm slightly shocked that Nagihiko was nowhere here since you hardly see any Rima fics without him so kudos to you :D
Kusukusu was vital and i'm glad since she's hardly used and really neglected! WE NEED THE CHARAS DAMN IT! *gulps* not that I should talk...
Anyways, if you were to continue this in a some sort of collection you'd receive a lot of reviews *namely from me*
I'll put you on subscription since you sound like a very promising author :)
Also i checked your profile for your other stories *guilty!* but you wrote some pretty awesome one-shots :) you SHOULD RAELLY TRY on writing a MULTI-FIC! I'll be watching out if ever you did :D
| KidTantei chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
The rules of three is wonderfully portrayed in this chapter. The way you wrote Rima's story, in threes, is heartbreaking. :'(
BUT it was a wonderful read. Well done~ :))
| My Silent Whispers chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
I liked this :)
Poor Rima \: