Reviews for Fatherhood
zurichtime 17 chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
ergh, i don't know what to say.
First, i think Yotsuba is from abroad right? some place that Yotsuba called "right".
Second, the way Mr. Koiwai just took away Yotsuba without trying to find her mother is just not like Mr. Koiwai.
You show Mr. Koiwai like a kidnapper.

*sorry for my bad grammar*
lynnie-chan chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
I really liked this, I hope you will update it soon.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
Um... you DO know Yotsuba was found abandoned on a boat right...? o.o
Dsman chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
he never thought to wait just in case and how could he not see the wanted posters
shishi chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
um...thats a little to...kidnappy. He just took her? huh, its kinda mean to her mom too,
Neobahamut86 chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
It's ok I guess, except yotsuba is suposed to be from another country (thats why Fuuka's classmates talked to her in english when they saw her for the first time.)
Nitroid chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
Made my day!
76Blank47 chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
OH MY GOODNESS DID THAT SERIOUSLY HAPPEN? :0
Lazy Gaga chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
heh, I dunno if that was really funny, horribly depressing, or just plain astonishing! I'm laughing at the terrible mistake Kowai is making, yet pretty sad for the lady who lost her only baby. Great job!
KamokuSenshi chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
In a way, it seems like he kidnapped her, even though it was unintentional. Poor Mrs. Midori. That's why you don't leave your kids unattended!
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
Perfect I guess