Reviews for Velveteen
Within Rhythms chapter 1 . 4/11/2012




/sits in a corner and cries
meikyyy chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
Wow, I cannot put it into words of how touchy your story was. It is perfectly written! I love your style! You can set up a scene very good!
anatagasuki chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
Ahhhhhhhh! That was soooo sad. Awwwwww. I like your style though. I don't even feel personally attached to either Yanagi or Akaya's character, but I really felt for them!
ChitoseSenri chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
you sure know how to make someone cry a river...

it's too sad, though i expected a sad ending from you about half way, but its too hard to hold my tears back. I started crying at the part where Akaya left renji to collect dust.

I have a distant feeling that i've read this somewhere, or is that me?

hey, sensei, are you going to do the Mpreg renji fic?
Faoiltierna chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
Oh, serious angst. Holy cow.

You made me hope! And then...poor, poor Renji!

Lady of Eryn Galen chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
.GOD. This was SO sad! I had to stop three time to keep myself from crying! In the end I gave up and cried until I was able to write this review.

Very nice work, really sad and yeah, just exactly what a drama fan like me needed!

Thank you for this