Reviews for Rose Weasley: The Next Generation book 1
mia chapter 8 . 5/12/2014
now this what I like danger and action just lovely online book I love that feeling
mia chapter 6 . 5/12/2014
i like to hear about harrys school
mia chapter 5 . 5/12/2014
its supposed to be bettie botts not birdie botts and it foo powder not flo powder
Guest chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
really good
Julia chapter 9 . 10/10/2012
Awesome book! Love it!
Queen of the Beasties chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
You have a great story, but it would be better if you had wrote it in the format J.K. Rowling did, having it from her point of view, saying "she" instead of "I".

Explaining everyone's character was a good idea for the people who don't know the next generation very well, but some of the dialog was a little unrealistic, for example when Joanne said, "I'm Cho Chang's daughter, your dad had a huge crush on my mom when they were younger." I would be a bit taken aback if someone said that to me the moment they first met me. I did like how you used Jo Rowling's name in the story, though.

I found a few spelling mistakes and grammar errors, but over all, this seems like a good start to a great fanfiction.