|Reviews for Undesired Desire|
| gta5lover-girl chapter 20 . 3/3
Why the ending?
| KatharinetheQuene chapter 19 . 3/14/2012
| 01wmaria chapter 17 . 2/22/2012
In the words of Darren lol FINALY, Wws wondering how many eons would pass till they hooked up lol. Plz update xx
| Savysnape7 chapter 17 . 2/11/2012
YES THEY ARE TOGETHER FINALLY! can't wait for the next chapter!
| Savysnape7 chapter 13 . 1/17/2012
OH MY GOD GREAT GREAT chapter a lot of emotions going on wait to read more!
| Savysnape7 chapter 12 . 12/15/2011
Looooooooooooooooooooooooove the chapter I cant wait for more!
| IrishInkWitch92 chapter 10 . 10/23/2011
love how Victoria is so protective over Darren
| Savysnape7 chapter 10 . 10/23/2011
Great chapter keep updating!
| Savysnape7 chapter 8 . 10/15/2011
I thought this was a great chapter...but I want some marten and Victoria action!
| NorthwesternBaby chapter 5 . 10/9/2011
no that's not right i love this story but it sick if you have a sex seen with seba and victoria so please dont do it
| Savysnape7 chapter 5 . 9/18/2011
Yes I think there should be one,by the way great story so far! :) :)
| cumberbatchbooty chapter 5 . 9/17/2011
VicotoriaxSeba sex scene... uh... no. Gross. Even the kissing scene distubs me, so, for the health and well-being of us all, don't do it. Seba's an old man. A very old, wrinkly old man. Just... Don't do it.
| KatharinetheQuene chapter 3 . 9/12/2011
I LOVE Victoria! She's funny and wants to kick everyone's ass! LOL!
| IrishInkWitch92 chapter 2 . 8/31/2011
Can't wait to read more its really good and love the OC she's fiery and I hate Arra. She is indeed a total bitch. Can't wait for more Victoria/Larten. :)
| vampires assistant chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
Hey, I'm quite liking this...
And I'm interested to why its a 'M' rating,
Keep going :)
this is good :D