Reviews for Along Came a Spider |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Totally awesome story. And wow, poor Sam went through a lot with that spider bite. Damn, but I hope I never meet up with a back widow spider! So glad that Dean was there for his brother. |
![]() ![]() Awwww that was a cute ending. And don't worry. There were a few mistakes here and there, but very seldom I noticed. So great job! |
![]() ![]() Loved this one |
![]() ![]() I was bitten by a black widow spider when I was in grade school, and I must say that your description of the experience is spot-on. Black widows suuuuuuuuck! My ankle was swollen to the size of a cantaloupe and for three days every muscle in my body ached like I had some monsterish mutant flu. I remember that my own doctor's advice was similar to that of your fictional doctor: unless you have trouble breathing, you'll be fine. Just keep downing muscle relaxers and fever reducers and enjoy three days of hell. |
![]() ![]() That was so adorable! Great job! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Almost started feeling sick myself while reading those descriptions. xD poor sammy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story |
![]() ![]() so it just...ends? don't leAVE ME CRYING LIKE THIS OKAY |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was awesome! I love how it helped mend their relationship and help Dean get his priorities straight. You kept everyone in character - well done! |
![]() ![]() D'awwwww |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my god, I love this thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hate spiders (cute story) |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW! *U* *U* I've read over parts of this FIVE MILLION TIMES, and I LOVE IT! *U* Rock on! God, so beautiful! Seriously, though, this was so cute and awesome! :D Love it! I did notice some either punctuation or incorrect word issues, and maybe an instance or two where Dean didn't exactly seem in character - haven't looked over it in a few hours-day-ish, but still. They're just tiny things, but things I noticed all the same. (My eyes are probably more critical than others' since I beta for a lot of people... XD) A quick read-through should suffice, I think. :D Rock on! Can't wait to see what else you write for this archive! :D Rock on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Adorable :-) This was lovely - short, sweet, and no Wincest to speak of (sorry, that stuff just gives me the heeby-jeebies . . .). Thanks :) |