|Reviews for Crepuscular|
| lynettecullen chapter 3 . 10/9/2011
Rose is a bitch.
| lynettecullen chapter 2 . 10/8/2011
This really good.
| lynettecullen chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
That was a HELL of a first chapter.
| dark wolf of death chapter 4 . 10/6/2011
Omg this story is so sick so far! I cnt w8 2 find out happns next
| Avarenda chapter 4 . 10/6/2011
You know what i like about this chapter? Alice actually TRIES to avoid Bella when she resolves too.
I always kinda thought it was BS in canon how Edward was all like 'Bella, we shouldn't be friends' even as he obsessively sought her out in the halls and watched her sleep at night. If you're going to avoid someone, actually AVOID them and don't be hypocritical.
So i actually like that Alice resolves to avoid B, and actually does. Until that last part.
But that was totes warranted because she thought Bella was going to die. Btw, interesting that Bella managed to avoid that car. I look forward to seeing how the Cullens react to this as well as what Bella is.
Plus, that hug between Alice and Bella was really heartwarming.
Thanks for the new chapter, i really look forward to more.
| Aidis chapter 4 . 10/5/2011
So first I need to complement you on an awesome fic. Seriously cool.
The ...improvements have me on the edge of my seat wanting more.
Second, I'd like to suggest changing your summary. I myself passed this fic up until just last night simply because it sounded a little weird. You may be able to bring in a much larger following if you make the summary a bit more dramatic.
Third, seriously, I'd just like to compliment you again and give the obligatory "Loved it! Update soon!"
| nightterror56 chapter 4 . 10/4/2011
All I want to know is what is she?
| trang-a-lang chapter 4 . 10/4/2011
pssh boring my ass it was fucking awesome! I love how your story is building cause I totally thought Alice was gonna save Bella from the truck but dang then that happens lol I hope you update soon! This is really good thanks. Oh yes are you gonna change the rating to M? I have a feeling this story is going to be very mature later on hehe
| Boo chapter 4 . 10/4/2011
Well I think this chapter was great! The story's finally getting somewhere!
| Pie3 chapter 4 . 10/3/2011
This was a good chapter and I was wondering when do we get to learn what Bella is.
| WolfDragonGod chapter 4 . 10/3/2011
great update i can't wait to read more, and see what the hell Bella is supposed to be.
| WolfDragonGod chapter 3 . 9/11/2011
great story i can't wait to read more of this. Please update again soon.
| snixxx69 chapter 3 . 9/11/2011
I really liked this chapter and I can't wait to read more :D
| Zippy Saboteur chapter 3 . 9/11/2011
I'd also think it's because weeks of torture can lead a person to not being completely right in the head, even if they're unaware of it or it's not obvious to others. You don't go through something like that without loosing at least part of your mind. You gain things too though, like Bella's apparently improved survival instinct first with Rosalie and then with Edward. Pretty interesting story so far. I'm looking forward to more.
| ttrouble95 chapter 3 . 9/10/2011
Haha it was good again! Having her experience it like she was Maggie was really cool, and no matter the wait I'm sure your next chapter will be just as good, if not better. I'm also kinda jealous Bella has such a nice bike...