Reviews for if you were
seasaltsails chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
coffee anddd ciggysss. i really like this because this is so Wren. the comparison between england to 'mericaa is simple yet more complex than basic. it's marvelous in its context; it offers a brilliant past that Wren can have.

your writing is wonderful for he and Spence. Aria is great in this too, especially with the subtle light up on her face when she mentions Ez. it's a captivating piece, but it works well more as a Wren-centric piece as he is the centre focus; Spencer does only enter this as a actual character at the ending, however, is the bestest.

this fiction is perfff.

/ SfS . favourite -
thehazeleyedloser chapter 1 . 9/2/2013

Wrencer is suddenly so beautiful.
- deanna
Guest chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
So many pretty walks you,a little bigger,IP,objective of this little,simply don't,of cake for god's sake.
kamikazehearts chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
I really love this, your portrayal of Wren is pure perfection and, while Spoby is my otp, I'll admit, I would've been more than happy to see these two reconnecting again. Thank you so much for this.
xXTheShowMustGoOnXx chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
This was really beautiful. I'm sad you probably won't update but I love it regardless. I liked the aria part. None of the girls seem to really interact with the others love interests so that was interesting to read. I know if I was Spencers friend I would be rooting for Wren.
little toy soldiers chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
Ah this was so lovely and perfect *applauds* the characters were spot on and the way you wrote Wren so tragically was heart-breaking. Definatly adding to my favorites
whispered touches chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
The main thing I was thinking as I read this was, "Oh, poor Wren," just because of the image you created - when he was with Spencer his eyes would just light up and the thought of him just walking the streets, a little unshaved, frowning to himself... It makes me sad.

The descriptions of Spencer from his mind wets beautiful; I especially loved "the scent of her skin" just because it's not a huge thing that most guys would remember vividly, but I feel like Wren would be one of those people.

The encounter with Aria was definitely unexpected, but nice, definitely. The way she spoke - that was perfectly in-character.

And, as hardcore SpencerToby as I am, I have to admit I liked the "I know we never had a chance" line. It's a little cruel, though (but also very Spencer and liar-like) how she used the feelings she suspected he still had for her - or at least the ones she knew he once had - to get him to stop helping Ian, that he still cared about her.

Awesome as always. :)

Forever Written in the Stars chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
I haven't watched much of the Pretty Little Liars on TV, but I do remember really enjoying the series, and I thought you did a wonderful job with this. I never really liked Spencer and Wren together, because I couldn't stomach the way she betrayed her sister (I know there were a lot of other issues at play, but still). This piece from Wren's point of view, however, made me lose sight of that and enjoy their relationship for what it was: two people who despite the circumstances managed to share a connection. It was beautiful. Thank you for sharing your work with us.