|Reviews for Protégé|
| Bomishna chapter 12 . 6/18/2013
Oh God wow. This story deserves so much more favs and reviews than it's already got. So. Much. More.
I can't find the right words to describe my feelings, the story is just so beautiful in everything that this story is, the characters, the plot (omg the plot), precious little but precisely gotten things that make simple moments really come to life, like working turntables, driving a car while trying to chat on a phone, etc...
Thank you so much for writing this, it's amazing. Definitely gonna reread it again and again. The best.
| HiImBEA chapter 12 . 3/24/2013
O/O that was so awsome XD
| blackrockerchic chapter 12 . 2/11/2013
HOLY FUCKING SHIT THIS WAS LIKE AMAZING MAN! Mad props, the story was good and this is hands down the best smut I've ever come across *applauds*
| foozlesprite chapter 12 . 1/22/2013
I can't believe I only NOW found this, but I wanted to let you know that I enjoyed the hell out of this fic. The brothers have the weirdest relationship, but it works for them, and I guess that's all that counts, isn't it? Your style is a delight to read, and it was a very well-edited fic. Thank you for writing and sharing 3
| Meejan chapter 11 . 1/21/2013
I didn't ship this before /cries
| Randomstrike chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
Very promising start for a fic
| chocolatemilk2 chapter 12 . 1/13/2013
what the fuck was that? no seriously how did that even happen I feel like you gouged my heart out with an ice cream spoon every sentence was perfect. this fic is perfect better than anything I could've ever thought up in ninety years you are so wonderful for making something so beautiful thank you thank you thank you
don't listen to that reviewer this could've never been too much you are an awesome writer you can pull off anything. you could pull off a pesterchum musical about spritelogs with no rhyme verse without trying I swear it just the co-awareness of both characters I was sitting there taking notes.
I just feel like gutted this is over but you ended it so well. the underlying relationship premise was such a beautiful undercurrent to their interaction and it feels like the off screen time's just as important as the written which is so hard to do you fleshed it so well it wasn't willing suspension of disbelief it was just try to believe this shit isn't real motherfer. there was nothing cheesy about this it was just very raw and heartfelt and stirring. never going to get over the glasses thing ever.
I swear I could just gush about this fic all night god you really proved quality over quantity right here the second person was so immersive and it never felt presumptuous or jarring I am so glad you wrote this the way you did
ugh I can't get over your talent I swear you're the best in near ever if you don't get a writing deal I'm just going to cry into my face because it's not fair
not to guilt you into anything but that is how good you are published literature weeps at your potential neglect heaven bless the day you got into homestuck
okay I'm just going to idol worship you from afar now I hope you post again some day I mean I really feel like you deserve all the attention you could get everyone loves your writing you know. afternoon.
| strangelyLIGHT chapter 12 . 11/14/2012
Best thing I have ever read. Seriously amazing. In all honesty I was pacing around my house with my face in palms, screaming and crying at the same time when I hit chapter 6 and on. Hoooly fuck, you're awesome at writing. Thanks for filling my Strider feels.
| YaOi69LoVeR chapter 12 . 11/4/2012
Oh that was amazing. It took me a while to read but my god it was worth it. I loved every second of it. It was interesting and even though it had time travel it wasn't confusing at all. It was truly amazing. Thank you so much for posting. :)
| sparklinggayboy chapter 12 . 8/30/2012
Holly crap what are these emotions? That was beautiful.
| flyingndying chapter 12 . 8/10/2012
This is really good. And I mean REALLY good. I don't have the right words to tell you how much I love this. Thou I find it kind of sad, but in a realistic manner. I love you for this and thanks for creating this story.
By the way, the characters were SPOT ON BRO
| MuffinWho chapter 12 . 7/31/2012
Dude. My feels. I really enjoyed your story. It was all nicely written and what not. Happy endings all around. Ahh. ;;
| Kasai-Kama chapter 11 . 7/31/2012
THE FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELS. JEGUS FUCK THIS IS MAKING ME SO SAD BUT I JUST KEEP READING IT!
| Blue-Rico chapter 12 . 7/28/2012
Oh my god, I was CRYING when Dave and lil-big Bro got all up and in trouble when he had to call the cops and make sure he was alright. I LOVE YOUR USE OF THE TIME WARP! It all flowed together so tragically, yet there was a beautiful flourish at the end. Im not sure what to make of it. Do they openly love eachother? Or is Bro going to suddenly be all like, NO MAN! GTFO. Im like, NOOOOOO! X( You did so well on this fiction! This is the longest review I have ever written at 3:00AM, so you better feel damn proud of yourself. I HAVE BEEN READING THIS NON STOP FOR 3 WHOLE HOURS!
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/5/2012
This is so beautiful. I just. I love this story. The writing is so incredible. And the errr certain scenes are so hot and the ending was so heartwarming.
The whole story is riddled with subtleties I had to read twice to catch and amazing imagery that I cannot even say how much i love this.
I love this story. So much.