Reviews for Freedom in the Eyes of Another
TapTiger chapter 3 . 11/11/2011
Ah man i just finished reading this story for a second time round and i must say it is fantastic. God its just so good and i wish i could list all the things that make it fabulous.

As ive reviewed a few chapters i had to leave this review here. Thank you so much for making it. :)
Demeter1 chapter 5 . 10/28/2011
I realized I never reviewed the end of this story, though I loved it! And yay on the eye thing; there were little clues on the second and third readthroughs, and those were enjoyable to spot now that I knew the ending. And I love, love, love that it was Kakashi drawing on Sakura's chakra rather than the other way around. Loved this to pieces and it's one of those fics that I'll probably be coming back to over and over again. )
Visperidia chapter 5 . 10/18/2011
Adding this story to my favorites because it's just so...weird. And I can admire that.
Aaron Nowack chapter 5 . 10/13/2011
I generally approve of any story where Sakura gets to be badass, but even beyond that this was a unique little gem. Well done.

I'm kind of curious what would happen next with the canon storyline so thoroughly derailed.
Tonnocal chapter 5 . 9/29/2011
Eye Crease Smile suddenly has a whole new meaning.

Reading this is like creepy fairy floss, melt in your mouth gore. XD
pastelstripes chapter 5 . 9/26/2011
I read this fic. a while ago, but finally got a chance to review. I've been with this since chapter 1, contemplating whether or not I should add it into my community; Ideal Sakura. I needed to make sure that you wern't making Sakura a Mary-sue, and that the fic. was actually good, and not just the plot/idea of it. Your fic. definably fits. I made sure not to add it until I got a chance to review either, I wanted to congradulate(sp?) you- if you see it as a good thing, and I think it's a great thing... Anyway, you wrote a great fic. I love the detail, and ever event that happened seems magical. I wish it could have been longer, but I think the length and place you begain it wonderfully creative. The whole thing Sakura did by telling team 7 that Kakashi has woken up ever now and then- brillant. I'm positive I never read a fic. where Sakura was this amazing. Plus the fact that I can tell she's definably not a Mary-Sue is beyond awesome. The way you portrayed her was great- I never imagined/read/seen a distorted/ditzy Sakura; you made her great. I know this fic. will forever be branded into my mind; and I welcome it. In the end, when we found out Sakura wasn't really crazy throughout the 'eye situation,' I was at first confused, but then understood it and it just made me love you more. I feel like you planed ever single moment of this fic. My favorite line in this whole fic, is without a doubt when Sakura said "Sucks. I wanted to be a hero, too." In chapter 5. That whole part with Sakura and Kakashi was really amazing. I know that I probably make the word 'amazing' sound dull with the amount of times I used it throughout this review, but trust me- I don't use words' carelessly; ever. Nicely done. _

-Nic
Raina Meldamiriel chapter 5 . 9/19/2011
such an amazing story ! i loved it, ! please please please continue it ! xxxx
JadelynNB13 chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
This story is awesome. I love how you portray Itachi and Sakura.
mnalfred chapter 5 . 9/17/2011
Awww Kakashi is so sweet. I enjoy this story so much.
Guest chapter 5 . 9/15/2011
Amazing story. This is one story I know I'll be rereading. Will you do a sequel? It would undoubtedly be awesome!
malko050987 chapter 5 . 9/15/2011
A wonderful story, thank you for sharing it with us :)
weeksauce chapter 5 . 9/15/2011
Ahh. This was a wonderful story. My only worry was that you'd loose your steam and it would just drizzle out into a half-assed longer story. I would've loved that, too, I suppose, but mostly because I adore your solid gold keyboard.

But with this ending it's just perfect, the story has come full circle. Pretty much all relevant plot threads have been tied up, and Sakura even got the much needed and deserved congratulation by Kakashi.

Well, only thing I should wish for is a sequel ... Though for a longer story I wager that this particular caustic mix of action and comedy wouldn't work out as great as it did here.

Anyway, congratulations.
TapTiger chapter 5 . 9/14/2011
Wait wait, the end as in the end if the story? Man i was totally getting into this as well, it was absolutely fantastic. The half delirious sate sakura was in with Kakashi was incredibly adorable and I really liked how the chains
Ichi-Stars chapter 5 . 9/14/2011
Wow. This is fantastic, and I seriously want more. I mean, I love how it ended but at the same time I'm waiting for more. The characters were not always IN character but fuck it, I didn't care.
always-kh chapter 5 . 9/14/2011
you have no idea how sad i was to see the words 'the end' there. But i still really like the story and the ending fits and was good though i still don't understand the chakra thing at all. The exchange between the two was so good though and kinda cute too.
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