Reviews for There is a Light, Outtakes & Extras
Joie Cullen chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
Wow... I mean, I've tried to stay sympathetic to Edward, but he just reminds me WAY too much of an ex I had. If he won't do anything to help himself he's not worth it. Seriously! Poor Bella.
FictionFreak95 chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
Loved this outtake BDC.

His POV is priceless and his self loathing is heart breaking. Then end killed me.

Days passed slowly, then quickly, then crawled again. Darkness held me. Alice's calls went unanswered. My single was scheduled for release. It wasn't the single I'd suggested, nor was it the arrangement I'd suggested. It wasn't anything I'd suggested.

He just makes me so sad. I think I'm thinking like Bella, I want him "fixed"... I hope she fixes him. Eventually.

Love you.

Thanks for this.

xoxoxoxoxo
Mary Alice 7 chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
And my heart continues to break for these two! You are an amazing author!
fuzzyltlwingedthing chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
Poor Morrisward is so fucked up.
LBJoy chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
My heart broke another little... Beautifully written - EPOV just as heart breakingly beautiful as the last chapter of TiAL BPOV... Can't wait to find out if he is Little One's father & if he is, how it all came about.

Thanks for sharing. Enjoy your vacation.
Aldi74 chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
This chapter was equally hard to read from his pov. Just gut-wrenching.
Lemon Charlotte chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
Goodness...He knew he should never have gone there but he really couldn't help himself, could he? I do feel terrible for him. His flight at the end of chapter 14 - he must have been consumed by guilt as well as anger. It would be so much more difficult to persuade himself that Bella would be ok if she were knocked up. Did he watch her from afar in those years between 1990 and seeing her again in 1994? So many questions yet unanswered. Loving this. xxx
obsmama chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
Lord this was fantastic to just get a piece of him to know how much she did consume him and really truly how hard he wanted to be ok for her.

Thank you for sharing my lovely!
flojo03 chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
when we read in bella pov we get a glimpse of edward & how he is feeling but through reading edwards pov you get to really see & experience the turmoil that he was going through, he wanted to protect her & look after her because he loved her & she brought so much light into his life, but this battle that he fought in his head made it so hard for him to do this. I can see why he walked out as he knew that she would never leave him and in order for him to save her he needed to make that decision and leave...cant say I like what he did but...thank you so much for sharing what pain & anguish he was going through
roxiegirl chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
Thank you. I loved getting into his fucked up head! His assessment is correct. He's an asshole. Mwah!
MoniNP Monica Nopi chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
O.o... poor guy... bipolar? something else? MoniNP/Monica Np ... TY for the epov! xx
SereneinNC chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
The glimpse into Edward's mind was so tragic, but beautiful at the same time. He never planned to stay...wow! So it wasn't necessarily the pregnancy that caused him to leave. Hmmm...
mommy2kh chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
Oh, Edward. I loved getting into his head during this time and I'm so glad he finally told her he loved her. So painful and so good!
Robfan06 chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
Wow! Thank you
annniej13 chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
My gosh. Thanks for sharing this with us. Poor guy. Just breaks my heart to know how much he fought against his demons but ultimately couldn't hold on any longer. I understand why he didn't want to take meds but I wish he would've tried. My heart hurts for both of them. Great outtake.

I hope your vacation is fantastic.

xo annie
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