|Reviews for Not Again|
| Feenrai chapter 6 . 2/4/2015
This was handled very well. I have, of course, been wondering how you'd take two stubborn people and make them spend time together, but you found a way of making it happen very naturally and believably :D
| Feenrai chapter 5 . 2/4/2015
Best reaction ever XD I like that neither Bella nor Paul in this story is suddenly all lovey dovey. They're both stubbornly fighting it and in denial. It should make for a great story seeing how they overcome it _
| Feenrai chapter 4 . 2/4/2015
Hehehe. Okay, again, you really write the bitchy-Bella well. I like that you don't make her perfect. She can slip and fall on her butt in surprise. Beautiful! XD
I was wondering when she'd find out, I knew they'd be in a rush since she kee[s trying to leave. It makes sense this way, and it was a good explanation.
| Feenrai chapter 3 . 2/4/2015
I've been trying to make an effort to review every chapter of yours I read because I love your writing and you deserve tons and tons of reviews...but you make it so hard! Hehe, this is probably the 10th time I've been halfway through or at the end of the *next* chapter before I realize I didn't review the previous one, because I was too excited to keep reading!
I guess that in itself is a compliment;)
I love how you're portraying Bella here. I mentioned earlier that I normally avoid this kind of attitude Bella, but I'm really liking your version of it. It's not overdone and it doesn't feel fake. I understand where she's coming from, and I get a wry smile when she does things like smile sweetly as she slams the door in Sam's face. It's a hard line to tread, but you write it beautiful.
| Feenrai chapter 2 . 2/4/2015
Wow. This chapter made me tear up. Poor Charlie! I'm glad she's staying :) I like the personalities you've given to her coworker and bosses.
| Feenrai chapter 1 . 2/4/2015
Mmm, this is a different Bella (or rather, Bell) for sure! I normally stay away from these kind of stories (Bitchy-Bella I mean), because *usually* it comes across to me as though the author is simply transferring their issues onto "Bella" and making her play them out, without any actual story/plot basis for Bella becoming that way. So far, however, yours is the complete opposite. Not that I'm surprised, I'm beginning to think I'll read everything you write-you're one of those authors that can write anything, it feels like, and make it believable and pull me in. So, great job! I never thought I'd read a story like this, but I'm only one chapter in and dying to hit "next" ;)
| Cramos28 chapter 14 . 1/16/2015
This story was amazing! I loved it and it kept my attention the whole time! I loved how Victoria let Bella lived. Great writing
| Kemq chapter 12 . 12/25/2014
just did a 2nd reread of this story and loved it as much as the first and 2nd time.
| sampam69 chapter 14 . 11/28/2014
This was a extremely beautiful story even with all the angst, thank you so much for sharing :-)
| I-Was-Here2345 chapter 14 . 11/11/2014
L Ed this
| TwistedNeiviv chapter 14 . 11/6/2014
A wonderful ending!
| TwistedNeiviv chapter 13 . 11/6/2014
Great chapter. Lots happened. Good movement. And yeah, wtf is up with Embry?!
| TwistedNeiviv chapter 12 . 11/6/2014
Dammit. I'm crying again.
| TwistedNeiviv chapter 11 . 11/6/2014
| TwistedNeiviv chapter 10 . 11/6/2014