|Reviews for Love The Way You Lie|
| A.Eelif chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
That was...WOW! I didn't think I was gonna like it at first cause it was so sad and I felt so bad for both of them, but I kept reading because it was so wonderfully written that I had to keep reading. I'm so glad I did. This was wonderful. Please, keep up the awesome work. Wonderful!
| ChocolateFrog97 chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
god, I love this song! I'm just listening to it now :D I loved this story ;)
| BeaLovesOscarinobello chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
It's like the most hurt/comfort story I have ever read. I was holding my breath till the very least, and I've cried so much. And you managed writing this so very beautiful story in only a few hours? Oh, I'm completely astonished.
| PearlDahlia chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
Oh I loved it! It was wonderful :D and your comments were funny haha I love this song and how sad but true it is... honestly I feel like the end of the song is no where near happy but I always want a happy ending for Grell! :D
| Ethelwyn chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
Really loved this one. Turning around an abusive realtionship in a way that actually works and doesn't just come out of the blue, far fetched, isn't easy, but you did it.
I was almost sure the story had to have a tragic end, which I really do not like. But you made everything alright and in a very feasable way.
William bottoming for Grell as a way to apologize was totally endearing.
Thanks for a great read, you made my night ;)
| LovelessTyrant chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
i LOVE this so much.. This is one of my fave WilliamxGrell fics.. Though I really don't want to imagine Grell as seme.. Hahaha.. But it was so awesome! Hope you write something with Grell seducing William.. Ohhh! That would make one of my dreams come true.. Hehehe..
| Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
Wow, this story is amazing. You've really explored a deeper level of the Will/Grell relationship. I tend to stay away from stories this graphic, but I like the song and this couple and decided to give it a go. After finishing the story I'm glad I read this one. You've seriously made this more than just a normal fanfic.
Rewatching the anime I noticed that William can come across as abusive towards Grell, so it's interesting you were able to center a story around that and make it fit well with the song.
Their relationship comes off as so realistic. The problems they face, you don't sugarcoat. Good work with Grell in this relationship, even though he suffers constant abuse he won't leave the man he loves.
Good work with showing William's struggle throughout the story. Even though Grell is the one who suffers most, you did a fantastic job with showing how Will knows what he's doing is wrong, but he can't stop. I like the details of how he mentally beats himself up about it after he strikes Grell. Also, good work with showing Will's possessiveness, how he often he objectifies Grell by saying things like how Grell belongs to him.
I mentioned it earlier, but the story fits the lyrics so well. You've done a great job displaying the love and how one character begs the other to stay then hurts him and repeat. The song you've selected is dark and the story fits the mood of the song perfectly.
Ronald is amazing in this story. It's nice to see that there is one person who genuinely cares for Grell. I love the image in the first scene where Ron is wiping the blood from Grell's face. It's interesting that you chose for Ronald to see Grell as more than just a close friend which helps explain why he's so protective of him. Also, nice job with the scene where he confronts Will at the apartment. That's a pretty bold move, this guy is his boss and much larger than him (Will could hurt him if he wanted), but he stands his ground in order to protect Grell. I love how you have him always there to protect Grell whenever he can. Amazing work with Ronald's character.
This story is so well written. It's dark and full of graphic violence, but it's written in such a beautiful way. You managed put the reader right there with them. I also like how even though the majority of this story is sad you give it a happy ending.
Amazing work with this story.
| Waiting To Be Broken chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
I, too, was almost scared to read the story but you got me hooked when Grell said '"That's the funny thing about love now isn't it Ronny... Even when it hurts you, sometimes it's still more painful to walk away from it."' An amazing line. I loved how you showed us the more... sane? side of Grell. We always see him like the loud shinigami that would jump on everything if it stays long enough and tho I love that side of him the one you revealed was beautiful and heart clenching. And Will... oh, Will... Sad part is that I caught myself wondering if their relationship would be like that if they ever get together in the manga (not something likely but a fangirl can hope :D) and almost always my answer was yes. This is so going in my favourites.
| xXxMusicSavedMyLifeXxX chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
XD For the end coversation between you and Will. Hillarious! Great story. It made me cry it made me hot and bothered... it made me laugh although I spent my time biting my lip so I wouldn't wake anyone and at one I was scared to even keep reading but I did. I love how you based it on such a sad song. This was wonderful outstanding amazingly addicting.