Reviews for Slip N Slide
Guest chapter 1 . 9/19/2016
Typical porn scenario its hot
Jeff chapter 1 . 9/8/2016
This was awsome i loved it! I never realy liked fanfiction before... you changed my mind. I have always liked pokemon, now i like fan fiction to! FIVE THUMBS UP! FIVE STARS!
Pearl chapter 1 . 3/19/2016
Never pictured Brock and Dawn as a couple. Usually I think of Dawn/Ash, Dawn/Paul, or Dawn/Gary
tiadb1996 chapter 1 . 3/2/2016
I don't normally read fics like this but this was is seriously good, I knew dawn liked Brock lol
Just A FF Reader chapter 1 . 7/2/2015
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GERD.
Matt chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
This is the greatest pokemon porno script i have read.

Good Job bro
W. R. Winters chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
I read your story, made me want to hurl. I would prefer if it was pearlshipping.
Reviewer1234 chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
Great story! I usually like to see the age of characters in fan fics though because if Dawn (10 years) had sex with Brock (...old enough to be a gym leader), that would be... wierd. Not to mention that Dawn was 4'11 when she was 10. Jhjgdmgj I agree! Pearlshipping FTW!
Jhjgdmgj chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
At the end, Ash came into the room, and kicked brock's butt and yelled " you can't sex with my girlfrnd you pervert! "
Reviewer98 chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
Lol. Ash is so clueless!
Mach the Slewfoot chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
Welcome back. :)

Ok. I'm going to be honest with you. I personally dislike lemons with a capital D. I find them to be repetitive and bland.

I did enjoy this story though. Your definition of slip n slide was creative, and the background (i.e. the trip to the water park) fit the title nicely. Your spelling and grammar were near-perfect, although there were a few fragments.

You made the right decision to separate this story from your Airports series. Speaking of Airport, can you come up with a sequel for the Blush-shipping chapter? You can always look at my stories if you need help.

-Mach68