|Reviews for Ready, Set, Don't Go|
| Fey Beauty chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
It seems there can be more to this story. It has a very good beginning, a great outlining, and A LOT of potential to become a great story… And I tend to be a sucker for happy endings and the like. I mean Dante has little to no family left due to the fates kind of interfering and all (BTW I would have used a different word but didn't want to get into trouble). I know Dante travels pretty much everywhere, and who's to say that he can't keep an eye on his remaining family. He could check up on them once in a while without them knowing, you know? Or one of his jobs could be in the same general area as Jasper. You think you could maybe do more of the story? I know I'm asking a lot and you'll probably not do it, but just please consider it.