|Reviews for Seen|
| Flameoguy chapter 1 . 2/20
Personally, I think you should continue the story. It's interesting! Maybe you could have another human see Charolette in the stand, and notice her wave for help of mouth 'help me'. Then he would save her and do some more interesting stuff, such as bring her home.
| Fantasy Dreamer the Believer chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
please contenue (wow i spell wrong... Wow i fail!) I love it please continue
| beccalovesbumblebee chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
| potentialauthor18 chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
I think I agree with MBenz28. Unless the point of your story is to ditch the style of the nice people and instead is the type of bean that most borrowers expect. It is unique in that way. Whatever you do, keep writing.
| Blazestar of Shadowclan chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
Interesting concept … I want to see where this goes & I like what I've seen so far!
| MBenz28 chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
If I could make a suggestion maybe in the next chapter Charlotte could be saved by another human who wouldn't make her a side show freak but try to protect her and find a way back the idea?
| DaughterofHades16 chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
I really like this story, being a fan of the Borrowers (: I really hope you continue it!
| TechGirl101 chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
I really enjoyed this I hope you keep writing. Update soon please