Reviews for Ten Days
Rachelea chapter 1 . 4/14
Awesome and really well-written. I couldn't wait to find out what the countdown was for...and when I did I had to go back and reread it. Really intriguing story, good job!
SeverusSnape3065 chapter 1 . 9/22/2014
I knew just from the description what had happened. Didn't stop me from crying like a baby at the end.
damncritic chapter 1 . 8/9/2014
Very nicely written. Though it had been a bit obvious from the start with lestrade's i'm sorry. But still, very nice.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/19/2014
Well that was unexpected and disturbing, but very good.
ThePentagonalVistaPoint chapter 1 . 2/16/2014
I saw it coming at about half-way along the story, when no one addressed John up to this point, but it didn't hurt any less. It was heart-wrenching, because I feel that this would have actually happened in canon. It was very well-written, and true to each character, and it made me sad. :( But lovely story.
MildlyMiffed chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
So I'm not saying that I didn't like it or anything - I think this was a clever and interesting idea and enjoyed reading it - but I'm basically only reviewing to say that you definitely got me there. I did not see that coming. End of story. I was reading through it, kind of trying to figure out the point - the plot, moral, whatever - but mostly just reading for the sake of reading, when I got to that punch line. And damn. I did not see that coming. I thought there was going to be SOMETHING, but surely not THAT. Jeez. And of course, I had to go back and re-read the parts with John to see if it, you know, 'works'. The whole punch line thing. And it totally did. It was so easy to see once I knew what was going on. So yes, good on you for writing this. You got me. Congratulations. :P
protectorofstrawberries chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
oh, god. this hurts. at first i didn't understand, i had to go back. i read some other reviews and finally the tears came. i think it was because i was denying the fact that john could possibly have died. but wow. this is amazing. but it hurts. it really does. wonderfully written. i really thought john was there, it was so realistic. well, time to go and cry. chaio
Click96 chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
You soul destroying git. You had to go and do that, didn't you? Now look. Anyone who reads this has their heart torn into a million pieces. Are you happy? Are you?
It's well written. Very well written. The way it all ties up is...wow. I really enjoyed it. Which probably shows I have something wrong with me, loving something that makes me depressed.
I kind of want a follow up. Would you consider? Please?
sh158 chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
Gosh, would you look at the dust at my feet that used to be my heart... I currently love and hate you. Hate because of what you did to me, I actually cried... But love because GOD it was good! 3
Saiyu.Aradatai chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
That is amazing! Seriously amazing!
whitchry9 chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
Oh I knew where this was going from the beginning, but that didn't make it hurt any less.
sparklybutterfly42 chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
wow. just wow. absolutely fantastic and horrifying.
Riya Morut chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
Oh, my... this was haunting. You really had me fooled. How on earth did you manage to write a story that's so depressing, but so wonderful? Many, many kudos!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
OH MY GODS
you can't do that hfzrxifzfd
I wasn't expecting that
Jesus Christ
I'm wounded
Too sad
GODDAMN IT, THIS WAS SO GOOD BUT SO FUCKING SAD AND I JUST FEEL DEAD NOW UGH WHY DID I READ THIS
Book girl fan chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
I thought he was going to keep John around permanently, to act as his conscience. I think I may be reading too many of these fics were John dies, I guessed from the start that that is what this one would be about.
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