Reviews for The First Time
sobepuzzler713 chapter 3 . 12/18/2014
That was a very sweet story! I've been hoping to read a story, that would depict my favorite treehouse couple as having met each other before; and hopefully being at least one person's first lover. I really loved this story and hope that you will either continue it, or write a sequel.
rann chapter 3 . 12/3/2011
What a lovely idea!
Bunny1 chapter 3 . 11/3/2011
SO sweet! Oh, I love it... I could see Marguerite and Roxton having known each-other once-upon-a-time... I could, I think their destinies were entertwined...
Clari chapter 3 . 9/5/2011
That was a BEAUTIFULL STORY! wow thank you very much for posting!
ann chapter 3 . 8/24/2011
I have one thing to say:Loved your story and thank you for giving Marguerite and Roxton a love story for a lifetime and her Jack back And a very happy love like to see other writers top here s to jack and his you for a wonderful ending for Marguerite and roxtons happy ever after love story.
Snowy chapter 3 . 8/17/2011
Excellent story and so true to the characters. Just the right length. Hope there is an epilogue at the inland sea.
daniM chapter 3 . 8/14/2011
beautiful! miss this incredible series of fic
Ice Queen chapter 3 . 8/13/2011
Love the story. Sweet and amusing. Please keep writing!