Reviews for Jealousy
JediGaladriel chapter 1 . 10/9/2015
Oh please please don't leave it like this! Please add more to this! Please let the crew finally figure out what's going on with AJ. And have a happy ending for AJ? Please please continue this! It has so much potential for a multi-chapter fic!
HeavensDarkestRose chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
Love this story and you really should continue so few Takers fanfics. If you do continue can you have AJ have a sad backstory and Lily be meaner and Jake dump her. If you don't continue than this was a great storry and you should write another for Takers for AJ. :)

Ashley-smith-writer-girl chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
I read this last night.

I must tell you, you’re a great writer.

It was short and I wish it could have went on a little longer, I was almost disappointed when it said complete, but none the less I was impressed with how well you got the original characters.

I felt like I was watching a movie, I could see every action and feel AJ’s emotion (damn Lilly), it was amazing how in this story I could relate to AJ so much and understand how he felt. So thanks for that, those are the types of writes I love.

I especially like John in this short fiction acting like a big brother to AJ. I hope you continue to write more stories, great job on this one.

So far it’s my favorite on the “Takers form”