Reviews for Attitudes & Accidents
cje24576 chapter 1 . 10/7
I absolutely love this idea! I love Hayden in Higher Ground! However, I do have to say you need to fix your punctuation. For example, in the first paragraph, you have a ridiculously long sentence starting at "truthfully they were"- it's in serious need of some commas or even splitting it up into 2 sentences. You have several run on sentences that need commas. You should consider getting a beta reader. I'm not trying to offend you or anything. Still loving the plot! I also wonder who the girl is that Scott/ AJ is seeing.
Niffer01 chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
First I have to say I use to love watching Higher Ground. Loved Scott/Shelby! Hmmm really interesting start. Wonder who the mystery woman is. Please update soon. Im really interested in seeing where this goes.