|Reviews for The Little Guy|
| xXxAnimeBellxXx chapter 5 . 7/4
... Okay, I give... I'm finally going to ask... Why was he so angry...?
| Nano111Desu chapter 15 . 6/24
This is pretty awesome! I really hope you will update soon, because that cliffhangers just... URGH!
| Shade the Hero chapter 15 . 6/21
My gosh this chapter. So much 'holy crap!' bottled into one chapter that I can't even put it into words. o.o;
Genesis is good again? Awesome. All of these characters learning the truth from Cloud? awesome. him falling into the reactor after Jenova burned? not good. Poor Zack. I was crying right thre with him, for him. It hurts so much to see him cry. And poor Cloud. What's with the glowing white eyes? I'm hoping its from the mako overload and not Jenova somehow rearing her ugly butt.
And now I've caught up. Poo. I LOVE this story! SO much. Cannot WAIT for an update. I hope it's SOON! :)
| Shade the Hero chapter 14 . 6/21
Hahaah Yes! Vincent's here! I love that guy so much! If there's one Turk/ex-Turk I'd trust my life with, it'd be him. Dude is the most awesome, badass mofo there is! lol. Though, it makes me wonder. Did Seph actually throw Cloud into the mako tank? ouch.
Cloud just dropped the biggest, hints on them though. How's he gonna cover that up about Knowing someone he shouldn't? oops. lol. Next chappie's gonna be fun. :)
| Shade the Hero chapter 13 . 6/21
lol, Zack arguing with Zack. I'd love to see that. xD
But Seph really has me worried though. :(
| Shade the Hero chapter 12 . 6/21
Well now. So he's now officially a Third, eh? Nice. not good because of Hojo, but it was either him or the Turks, and at least him Hojo, Cloud could have Zack or Seph standing by. Reno already proved where his loyalties lie, and it's not with Cloud. Not cool. Reno, you lose brownie points for that.
Have I mentioned before how much I love this story?
| Shade the Hero chapter 11 . 6/21
I don't know which part was more hilarious. Zack and Cloud's phone chat or a very sleepy Cloud towards the end. It was so cute, like he was a five year old kid. And calling Sephiroth princess... xD
$24 in library fines? Pfft, that's nothing. Try $75. Though, it wasn't my fault they lost one of their own movies before checking it in. So naturally it was still under my card until they found the damn thing crammed behind the box for the 'after hours' drop box. I swear if it wasn't the only library around...
Anyway. I am fully loving this story. I've almost caught up too! That makes me both happy and sad. What am I gonna do once I catch up? Hopefully an update for the next chapter isn't too far away.
| Shade the Hero chapter 10 . 6/21
O-M-G! *bursts into laughter* This chapter! *gasp* it was so FREAKING HILARIOUS! xD Figures the one thing that would wake Cloud up and get him to react would be that freak...who is now interested in him...and called him specimen. ...not good.
I'm glad you added in that extra bit at the end, because it was way too damn funny! Pink bunny slippers. And the fact that Cloud told Seph as Zack before Zack did made it even more epic! xD
| Shade the Hero chapter 9 . 6/21
Oh shit. Whatever that crap was sent his mind right back to his 'I am Zack First Class SOLDIER! How do'ya do?' persona? Not good. The next chapter's gonna be fun. But boy sill Seph be pissed when he finds out the Turks did this to Cloud. And Reno... Sometimes I love him, sometimes I hate him. Right now I'm caught somewhere in between. lol.
| Shade the Hero chapter 8 . 6/21
Once again, I love how you write for Sephiroth. He's just so...adorkable is the only word I can think of that does him justice.
And the way he was chasing Zack reminded me of how kids chase each other around a playground. Too cute. xD
| Shade the Hero chapter 7 . 6/21
Well, normally don't review chapters like these, but since you asked. I'll oblige. I'm the type of reader that pictures everything I read as if I were watching it as a movie. I try to picture every detail and therefore paint a decent picture. there are a few things however that I often 'skim over' instead of read full out. I mean no disrespect by it. I just don't enjoy reading scenes like that. But, that's only my taste. I don't enjoy sing-a-longs and I don't enjoy sex scenes. There's more than a few Cloud x Tifa stories I don't care for because the writer seemed to believe it was the perfect way for Tifa to relieve her stress after running the bar every night and Cloud was her 'bedtime hero'. *insert eye roll* Now, I am a big Cloti fan, but there are ways to go about it and ways that should never be published.
Basically, I can't really judge the scenes as I don't honestly read them. I mean no disrespect, it's just not my thing. Everything else about this story I am completely enjoying and you have everyone perfectly in character! And how awesome is Seph? I mean to actually let Cloud use his bike whenever? Hel-lo! That's awesome. And a pretty damn good apology if you ask me. And Seph chasing Zack with a letter opener. I had the biggest laugh at that. xD
| Shade the Hero chapter 6 . 6/21
Once again, another flawless chapter. Cloud's a funny drunk! xD And Zack is once again, so totally Zack. I love this story and I love your writing. Keep. It. Up! :)
| Shade the Hero chapter 5 . 6/21
lol, Reno. I swear. If there's one monkey wrench in the works it's him. I'm not a fan of the Turks, but he's my favorite. I really loved this chapter. Cloud can still kick butt and it was pretty cool to see him interact in Wutainese. I think my favorite part has to be when eh was trying to get back into the Shinra gate. Him baring his fangs at the guard and then handing the phone to him with Seph on the line, "Yes, Mr. Strife." Oh-ho, 'Mister' Strife? Looks like someone just got himself chewed up and and spit out by the General. Love it! xD
| Shade the Hero chapter 4 . 6/21
I loved Seph's POV. And this story is so easy to read. Many times stories with longer chapters take me a while, but I'm just flying through this with ease. It has such a great flow to it. And such a nice balance of comedy along with suspense and 'oh shit' moments. I love it! Great character writing too. It's not just Zack that you've nailed perfectly, but Seph too. And Cloud's attitude is so awesome and witty.
Plus this POV game me the impression of Seph holding Cloud like one would hold a pikachu. Don't ask me where that image came from, it was just too cute not to mention. xD
| Shade the Hero chapter 3 . 6/21
Damn Zack's hilarious and awesome and you got him spot on! I thought it was both funny and awesome as hell when Sephiroth saved Cloud from that blade, and dare I say it, a bit cute? lol.