Reviews for First Time We Met
annonymous chapter 1 . 1/30
there's a bit of wrong grammar. when blue said this place is the starting point of you and I it should've been you and me. the subject in the sentence is the place, not both if them so it should be you and me correct me if I'm wrong
Flipnhaole chapter 1 . 6/21/2014
Heh. This was cute
iRaineee chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
There are few minor mistakes. However you did a great job on this story :D
Pamycatz chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaah. *-* Amei.
Sério mesmo. Amo esse casal.
Primeira fic? Tem certeza?
wooow, Amei mesmo...

(( *-* sorry for the English.))
Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
I felt so sorry for Red at the beginning!
fishoom chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
I really loved the story!

There are a few areas you might have missed.

For example:

For a hundredth times For a hundred times

Wh, why did you do that for? Wh - what did you do that for?

All minor mistakes. Otherwise, very cute!
Queen Cakey chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
Hiya~

well it was very cute -

nya~ Now I shall start on your request (I like to read people's stories who comment on mine~)
Bestofrafa chapter 1 . 10/6/2011
I liked this luckyshipping. Very cute and funny :)
HenryN chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
Really good story. Hope you continue LuckyShipping :)
a random reader chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
uwaaa, i don't like this story at all! in fact, i loovee it! this is soo good, i love the way Red confessed his feelings to Blue. it's just adorable. you're a really great author. your first time and the results is good.

PS: will you make another Luckyshipping story? i hope you will.
SpecialPikachu chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
Cute story, I like it