|Reviews for Dreams Aren't Real|
| LadyGhai chapter 15 . 2/1
I love it! Great story :)
| Sis chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
I can tell this is going to be really good
| zei1827 chapter 15 . 9/24/2013
Yes,the fight at the end was simple, but i was so focused on their relationship that your simplicity was a plus!
Great work :)
| Julie dreamer chapter 15 . 9/4/2013
I have to say that I am completely in love with your stories, ever since I've started reading them I haven't been able to read no one else's stories.
The plots are always perfect and the way you write both Sasuke's and Naruto's POVs shows a lot of their real personalities, which is a very difficult thing to do.
I've read all of your stories and I loved them all, there wasn't any part of them that I disliked!
My favorite is the "WNL series".
But then I read "Dreams aren't real" and now I have a new favorite one!
I cried A LOT in the chapter where Naruto says his goodbyes to sasuke in the fields, and cried even more in cheaper 14!
I loved the ending! It was perfect!
You're a great author! :)
I have just one question, it's about "The long way home"
I haven't read it yet because I just finished this one, and I wanted to know how many chapters you think there will be for that one.
Thanks and congratulations on your stories!
| mija7171 chapter 15 . 8/20/2013
Omg...wow just wow this was an amazing story..it was recently rec'ed to me and i have to say its one of the better storirs ive read in a long time and im assuming this was well and done by the time sasuke and the kages actually did join the war in the real manga which is soo cool that this can actually happen if they put their minds to it lol it makes more sense that sonething simple would bring obi down instead of all their big jutsu...anyhow thank you for tha amazing read...smiles mija
| thudambBastard chapter 15 . 7/20/2013
I loved the little wink Sasuke gave Naruto, what a nice detail ;)
When Sasuke poked Tobi's forehead I was slightly wondering what was going on and why his Sharingan was activated. Turns out it was for the best of purposes really!
The way you listed the scenarios were nice, I like it when a story is not completely easy to figure out, you might suspect the ending, but the inbetween's, why's and how'smust be interesting still!
When the fight was over and Killer Bee and Kakashi witnessed them kiss I must admit I suspected some sort of smartass comment or wicked reply from Killer Bee *shrug* somehow Kakashi is all knowing, his reaction was accounted for *grins*
I am glad they weren't secretive or embarresed about their relationship, it seemed natural they wouldn't be, since they've been through so much together by now.*wink* slight pun intended...
Yet, in your WNL it seems natural they want to hide it... I guess the need to reveal depends on the circumstances. Somehow you just manage to mold every story-decision you've made into one of justification by further explaining as of why this is the right choice through your characters, and you manage to do it flawlessly and convincingly... you never cease to amaze me.
The ending was nice, their hands slightly touched? It seems like some small gesture that would residue between them.
The prologue was fucking sweet! They went to the beach both of them dreamt of, that's like slightly humorous(of course they have to go there, love birds!) and very romantic.
The description of Naruto's eyes being bluer than the water itself impressed me. It is popular to connect Naruto's eyecolor to the ocean and sky, but a description like this I'be never stumbled across!
That Naruto wish to go all the places they dreamt of too is a sweet gesture. It's nice that although they had all of their struggles they ended up with an adorable happy ending. I'm a sucker for happy endings, so sue me, but fuck they just hit home every time!
I really liked this entire story, it was an entirely original plot, and the writing was great. How did you come up with it?
| thudambBastard chapter 14 . 7/20/2013
What. What just happened? Sasuke was behind it all, somehow? What.*minfuck* Okay so at least I figured Itachi had something to do with it all! But the fact that it was Sasuke's subconscious desires it was epic, I must say. I really like how you made him doubt himself!
And the ending... *sob* you tore my heart out... that was the most adorable, yet tragic scene ever. And you ended it at the perfect time too.*keeps sobbing quietly*
Oh, and if you wonder why I'm not posting from my profile it's 'cause I'm reviewing from my phone yet again. I've taken a liking to reading your stories right before bed, then at least I know my dreams will contain something delicious! ;)
| thud chapter 12 . 7/16/2013
I really like how they're slightly awkward toward one another at first!
The thing that Naruto prefers the real deal is touching, cause so many desire unrealistic things.
I like the detail of Sasuke having scarred skin. It fits his persona.
The smut was wonderful! Very well written; discreet yet very imaginable.
Good work as always!
| thud chapter 11 . 7/16/2013
I finally got time to read this! It's Great, wonderful chapter!
| HoshiNatsuki chapter 15 . 7/13/2013
I think I read this story around 5 or 6 times. Lol. Anyway, I've finally decided to write a review and I apologize now for the length. Your story is absolutely wonderful. The personality of each character is spot on and the development of their relationship isn't too fast or too slow. Moving on, your story is incredibly creative, fresh, and different. It was amazing how you tied everything together to make it flow so easily. I really enjoyed the fact that you made a plot twist at the end. I thought the genjutsu was entirely Itachi's doing only to find out that was only partly him. Whereas some make it obvious, you kept the reader guessing. Oh, and when Sasuke said he was going back to Madara, I literally cried. Lol. It was so sad. Thank you for the amazing story, I'm sure I'll read it again and again. Keep writing, you're really good at it. :)
| thud chapter 10 . 6/25/2013
Action definitely has arrived!
It was good to have Naruto talk with Sakura. Can't wait to find out what happens next!
I hope Sakura finds out about their relationship... hehehehe (slight bashing)
| thud chapter 9 . 6/25/2013
Dun dun dun DUUUUUN! I like their cuddling at the end, it's so cozy3
As predicted, some action! It was awesome really. I can not help but to. think the monsters eyes are red because it has Sharingan eyes? ;)
I really liked this chapter.
| thud chapter 8 . 6/25/2013
I wonder if there's some upcomming danger too, with the mentions of the genjustu creator's unkown purpose of the dreams. Perhaps someone is set on killing them? o: Though I'm convinced it's the all-knowing Itachi who has used his last strengths on playing cupid!
A good story still, yet I miss some real life interactions. Like Naruto and his team going on a mission... and perhaps how his team percieve him whilst sleeping and having these m-rated dreams with Sasuke XD
| thud chapter 8 . 6/25/2013
Ouhhhhh! I really liked the part where Sasuke nibbled at Naruto's ear whilst stroking his thumb at the waistband. XD
| thud chapter 7 . 6/24/2013
"As they fucked eachothers brains out, against the cave ground, cave walls and anywhere that wasn't too cold and uncomfortable.
Well okay, thry did it there too."
PRICELESS, HAHAHAHA XD