Reviews for Control
Kura101 chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
"I've already been to bed with The Devil, so any other punishment pales in comparison." I love that line! Great little story you have here ] Cheers to happy writing!
Lyneel chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
very good, I pretty much can imagine Florian saying all of this in his mind. And as I usually don't particulary enjoy such inner monologues, I found this one pleasant and rewarding. very nice :)
astraplain chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
Very nice. I like that Florian understands and accepts Ray's need for control, and retains his own by giving in to Ray's need. I also liked that Ray doesn't bring the teasing about Florian's debt into the bedroom.