Reviews for One Last Drop
SGWfireandice chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
I love this song and I definitely feel this story gave it justice. This is very well written, clearly showing both Bella and Edward with problems and flaws which I feel is very important.


strangevisions chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
oh God, dat waz b'ful.

luvd it.
edla chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
beautiful story it woulve been nice for u to conitiue tho
Trickeytricky chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
Great story, such realistic subject matter and feelings all around. Great job!
april666king chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
Love this! Are you continuing?
Rebadams7 chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
That is such a lovely, real turn of life

well done

Cullenosopy chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
Quite the turnaround!

Thanks for sharing!
DreamOfTheEndless chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
Absolutely awesome story! Loved it. It should have won the contest, damn it!

twinerdforlife chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
Great job Lou! I loved it. It was so real and raw. Thank you for showing true real life emotions in a fic. You did it beautifully. Thanks for sharing!
A is for Angel chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
awwwwwwwwwww i loved it i defintely thank you for putting this up
Dooba chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
Oh, how fights like these, when everything seems to shatter, can bring two people so much closer together unexpectedly. You did well in this, they both have their own demons and their own battles to fight. In their attempt to not bother the other with their problems, they shut the other out completely.

Edward shows how much he really loves Bella when he asks her to let him in when she pushes him out again. Miscommunication can be so painful, and then when finally, finally everything is being said, it can bring such a relief.

You could easily continue this into a full fic if you were to be so inclined. What I like about this is that they both have flaws, both feel that they are right, and yet both realize they have to make amends. It shows strong writing and it shows how good an author you are.

Thank you for writing this!
Raum chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
It's very interesting, thanks for letting me know about it.

Are you going to expand it?


- Raum
mrs.justenbeeebir123 chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
omg its sooo cuuutee!