Reviews for Undisclosed Desires
Soulmate Ficwriter chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
So glad they got together! Very hot!
Lori94 chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
sessahhh chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
Oh excellent, glad they got together in the end. Great job. Sucks that they wasted so much time but maybe it was necessary. Good luck in the contest.
Fliberty chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
This is sweet and very hot. God knows how these two kept their feelings hidden for so long though.

It surprised me (and Peter too, I expect) how much Jasper had changed in their time apart. Jasper's mouth was hot!
kirifox chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
And again, and again, and again...

More please!
deerslayer1100 chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
KM525 chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
That was fucking hot! I've never been a fan of Peter but that's becasue he is usuallt cock blocking Jasper & Edward.

But this was sensational!
Gillian Aubrey chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
You did a great job with this, I love how they end together after all the years they wanted eachother! Good luck! )
VAVikingGirl chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
This was a very hot fic. I liked how Jasper warned Peter that he likes things a bit rough. Looks like Peter does too.
rhythm junkie chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
Love Peter/Jasper fics - more must be written. This was deliciously naughty - good luvk!
harrytwifan chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
That was hot! Loved the pairing. Good luck in the contest.

twimama77 chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
vey cool