Reviews for Dearest Forsaken
brittish chapter 2 . 4/23/2014
damn this was good! I'm not very good at posting reviews but I just wanted to say that I loved it :D
Nostalgic Beauty chapter 2 . 8/28/2013
Whoa, I could actually see this happening in the actual storyline. That takes talent. Nice job.
MaeKat chapter 2 . 5/22/2013
Amazing, just stunning and the scene with Lucifer and Sam at the creek, chillingly awesome.
:3
thesunwillshineclear chapter 2 . 8/18/2012
The ending made me smile :) And Lucifer was chilling as always.
criminalxxxmindsxxxfreak chapter 2 . 8/10/2012
This... was just... amazing.

Seriously. Everything about it was absolutely perfect and I loved it. I could see the characters and hear their voices and it fit so wonderfully with the show it really could've been a missing scene. I really loved the way you described everything, the way you wrote the dialogue between Sam and Lucifer.

The way you described the way Sam was feeling inside, all his doubts and thoughts and insecurities and the self-loathing. Just fantastically written.

I loved this so much! Brilliant work!
BetahimeTsukiko chapter 2 . 12/18/2011
Poor Sam, his pain was palpable.
Jane88 chapter 2 . 8/28/2011
Wow, that was amazing! And so emotional, so intense... your Lucifer gave me the creeps, I've got goosebumps all over. You wrote him so well. It's sad that Dean doesn't know what happened to Sam while he wasn't around, he'd be devastated. I totally loved it!
KKBELVIS chapter 2 . 8/22/2011
Your Lucifer was fab-amundo!

I love this line: "So, uh, listen, man. Earlier, I, uh…I made a pretty big friggin' mistake, and…uh, I think we should meet up." There was no anger in his tone. No bitterness. Just the slightly awkward, sheepish, hopeful tone Dean usually reserved for when he was trying to spit out some sort of apology.

I felt like this was part of the episodes. It fit like a glove.

Thank you,

Karen
KKBELVIS chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
Been dying to read this and now here I am...yahoo!

Love this line: A sudden grip on his shoulders pulled him backwards before he could overbalance and fall.

"Oh, don't speed things up on my account," the voice drawled. "By all means, take your time. Count your regrets. Say your goodbyes to this cruel world."

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I could feel Sam's guilt...well done.

And his 'old lady' car...LOL...loved that bit of humor

And now on to chapter two.

Karen
Sparkiebunny chapter 2 . 8/21/2011
Wow, great story! Very unique and well-written. Well done! :)
Jianali chapter 2 . 8/17/2011
great job with Lucifer! He gave me chills as I was reading.
CeCe Away chapter 2 . 8/15/2011
You wrote Lucifer really well, almost chilling with the things he said. It's almost sad that Dean has no idea what had been going on. Of course he was having his own little trip to deal with also.
supernaturaldh chapter 2 . 8/15/2011
This was the bestest. I loved it. Thanks for sharing it you crazybeagle you! D
twomom chapter 2 . 8/15/2011
This was so sad. I felt so bad for Sam at that time. He was carrying so much baggage that he should have never carried. You did an amazing job and I commend you for it. Thanks so much!
SupernaturallyEgocentric chapter 2 . 8/15/2011
Wonderful story, very well done. Love it.
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