Reviews for the awesome adventures of amynda in the fayz!
Guest chapter 23 . 3/8
Poor Pierre...
Guest chapter 7 . 3/7
(This is the same person from before) I also put ラクダ into google translate and the result was "camel".
Guest chapter 7 . 3/7
I typed さみはドし一クちゃんのニ王人とぺギソです into google translate and I got this:

The clams are Pegiso and I'm the King
amynda chapter 9 . 4/24/2016
this stary so good so scary better then the real books
KHCMC36 chapter 1 . 7/13/2015
Kill the Sue! Kill it! Kill it with fire!
smeds1 chapter 12 . 3/5/2014
ボーイズラブファンの女の子 means Yaoi fangirl...
Guest chapter 4 . 3/1/2014
The term kawaii is Japenese and you basically just said "lol cute"
Nick chapter 3 . 1/16/2014
If this is a parody it's not really funny, just stupid. And not even stupidly funny.
CharlieMcCock chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
Your story sucks.
pheonix2012 chapter 9 . 11/17/2012
KEEP WRITING!
pheonix2012 chapter 4 . 11/17/2012
My god... You may be able to find me on Wattpad, I'm an author...too... Yeah so amongst my other books, I also have a book where I collect some of the worst fanfictions ever, called Worlds Worst Fanfictions! I am happy to say that YOUR story will be making an appearance... So... Please continue with this!
TheMysteriouswatcher chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
Really good writer for your age?

Uh... No.
Amalise chapter 18 . 9/25/2012
Is your fucking characters name Amanda or Amynda?
Seriously... Sheesh.
smokebone chapter 4 . 9/21/2012
Alright- I know I promised... But I just can't do it any more.
My eyes are burning from reading this trash.
Please, no more! Never again!
Knowing that you'll delete this because your uncomfortable with the truth- I'm telling you, this is horrible.
It grossly disfigures and slanders Gone, fanfiction, and all writers in general.
Please, delete this and make the world of fanfiction a better place.
Smoke&Bone
smokebone chapter 3 . 9/21/2012
Wait- a skintight black bodysuit that shows off big boobs, long legs, and perfect features? Where would she find that in the FAYZ?!
And did I find that correctly? She ate pot? Last I heard, you smoke pot.
Grammar is still atrocious. And once again- NO killing the necessary canon characters (Mary). God! Ridiculous!
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