Reviews for Key
Guest chapter 79 . 7/26/2017
...what's with all the banging jokes O_o
oathdoesreading chapter 80 . 7/6/2017
oathdoesreading chapter 68 . 7/5/2017
her name isnt Mai Davis YET
oathdoesreading chapter 61 . 7/5/2017
nO BAD DUN RUIN MEH SHIP I ALREADY HAVE A HATER well like a hundred haters but still
oathdoesreading chapter 57 . 7/5/2017
Martin is dead to me in this story
GreenDrkness chapter 83 . 8/22/2015
I think I spent a total of three hours reading this and I can positively say I quite despise Martin but love Luella though she could have used a bit more character development
I love how Naru basically kidnapped his bride like in Norse mythology
You know Naru is a strong character because if I was in his shoes I think I would have broken down and had many anxiety and panic attacks
Keep on the writes
SilverGhost chapter 39 . 11/30/2014
And this is rated K...?
PBMunchkin-Nikkelangelo chapter 83 . 9/29/2014
THERE'S MORE!? YES! I love these stories SO much.
The Blue Rhapsody chapter 21 . 9/29/2014
Ergh, I REAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAALLY don't like Martin. As in, I'm-about-to-slap-him-until-he's-blind kind of slap. He's judging someone based on their reputation! Not to mention he's making Noll's decisions for him! GAH! I need to take a couple breaths...
SSailorSScoutSS chapter 38 . 5/10/2014
holy jeez! this chapter! oh my goodness! I can't even imagine what Naru would begin to feel like seeing that happen to Mai! great writing so far!
archangelBBQ chapter 23 . 1/10/2014
I just finished reading Are You Happy (hereafter AYH) and am now about this far into Key. Your story(ies) intrigue me! I like the different take of Naru going to Japan for the same reason, but everything else is different. Yet you still brought the group together and provided the SPR interactions we all know and love.

It's fun to read your writing, but I think you could do with a review read-through to catch spelling errors and formatting (indicating line breaks when the scene changes, etc.) Especially for AYH - I am not noticing it as much in this second part of your trilogy.

WHY though must Mai be so clueless and naive and stubborn? And Naru's brusqueness and extreme jerk-i-tude, especially in Key. I know that he is arrogant and all, but you showed growth for him in AYH and his continued uncommunicative-ness in Key is a little aggravating. I just want to shake them and squish their faces and tell them to be honest with themselves and with each other and everything will be a whole lot easier. That's not how it works though ;P

The impatience of Martin and Luella is really interesting and kind of unexpected, and I like it. It seems realistic- parents are always trying to nudge their children in ways like that (sometimes more forceful than others). Charlotte seems like a real annoyance, so I'm looking forward to Naru telling her off some more ;)

I hope Mai gets out of this house soon! And what's with this dream... I guess I'll see what happens in the next chapters... :) :)
NaginiFay chapter 83 . 9/23/2013
I enjoyed this, though it should definitely be rated at least a T.
EmeraldHope chapter 17 . 7/21/2013
Stupid Martin...
Iloveanimex chapter 49 . 7/11/2013
That is... something? I don't know. How is this even... You know what, its fine.
...good chapter? I will have bad dreams from now on :D I, in a creepy way, liked it XD
Iloveanimex chapter 38 . 7/11/2013
You are so mean sometimes :D It is a harsh chapter but you are a good writer. Its hard to make people think a main character will die. I know you wont kill Mai off but I have to remind myself. The only reason I know is because I have read this before :D
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