Reviews for It's All On You
Anon chapter 30 . 1/7/2012
So much relief just came over me as i read this chapter but still another massive cliffhanger as usual you need to update AGAIN and AGAIN! This story is making my day everytime it is updated and i love the story and i ahve also fallen in love with the characters! You are an amzing writer! 3
screwmekstew chapter 30 . 1/7/2012
oh my gosh.. thanky you! :D I'm glad he didn't find her in the room with Nick, that could have ended very badly.. YES, TYLER! JUST KILL THAT SUTPID ASSHOLE! hahaha... I was so happy. I know that's a little mean but HELL YES! Tyler knocked Neil out & I fucking loved that! Mallory's plan worked & I'm quite proud of her :'D But now they really need to talk, Mallory got to tell him what happened to her, the she was forced to do deals & stuff... And Tyler got to believe her but I know he will, he loves her... You wouldn't make such a story up. It was an amazing chapter, thank you.. and btw thanks for Max pov - that fucking dumbass.. he's not that stupid though, his plan wasn't bad either but Mallory's worked out better :D haha.. Can't wait for the next chapter *-* Love, Anna.
HockeyChick10 chapter 30 . 1/7/2012
Tyler with a gun...hot! Go Mallory. Neil and Nick still need their balls chopped off. You can add Max to that list too. What a bunch of douchebags!
NJSilla chapter 30 . 1/7/2012
I don't have much to say

I am speech less with this chapter

I was so fucking scared

its perfect

i love it

I do though have ONE thing to say

"Please don't hurt me Mallory, I don't think my heart can take it." THAT THEY TALK HONESTLY WITH EACH OTHER I HOPE SHE DOESNT BREAK HIM BECAUSE IF SHE DOES I WILL HATE HER

FOR FUCKING EVER!

NADI, HOT AND BOTHERED,HIGH K ;)
Hello chapter 30 . 1/7/2012
Love this :) Can't wait for the talk
NabStew chapter 30 . 1/7/2012
OH DEAR GOD!

TYLER A GUN HOTNESS OVERLOAD

LOL

I fucking loved this chap Clary!

He saved her :') I love them :') Mallory did well with Nick :')

Tyler almost kill Neil :')

hahaha

THIS IS AWESOME, OMG OMG THEIR TALK WOULD B CAN'T FUCKING WAIT, you like to kill me with every chapter don't you? lol

ILYWIFEY

BAM

3
The Golden Child chapter 30 . 1/7/2012
OOOOOOOOMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGGG

THIS

I CAN'T

MY BODY WON'T STOP SHAKING

MY HEART IS POUNDING

I AM SO SHAKY RIGHT NOW

OMFG

I WANNA KILL MAX

HE NEEDS TO DIE

CAN TYLER SHOOT HIM NOW?

you...

...this is favorite chapter

Ok the beginng, I hate Max now that I was inot his head a little. Sorry if their are speelling mistakes. I'm a litterly shaking. Can't calm down. hahah

And then Tyler.

Oh, Tyler.

And then Mallory! FUCK ME! HELLO POOTY MOUTH

I want to have sex with her. Really bad. She turned me on. Like, Kristen was in my head and everyhting! haha

I am so happy they got away

please

don't leave me hanging for long

xoxo

Africa, TomStus Unborn Baby,

aka

YOUR WIFE

3
Your daughter chapter 29 . 1/6/2012
I love this fic soooo much. Its all I think about night and day! When will you update? Please update soon! :D
HIgh K chapter 29 . 1/6/2012
I HOPE YOU KNOW HOW AMAZING YOU ARE

I WILL WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER

THAT WILL HOPEFULLY COME SOON :)
Ebony ur bff chapter 29 . 1/6/2012
OMG OMG IM DYING UPDATE NOW NOW NOW PLEEEEEASEEEEE! LOVE YOU. DYING FOREVER.
The Golden Child chapter 19 . 1/6/2012
OMFG! YOU ARE AMAZING! I CAN'T...THIS STORY IS BEAUTIFUL!
The Golden Child chapter 12 . 1/6/2012
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! SO MUCH ANGST! LOVE IT! OMFG! going to read more!
Hot And Bothered chapter 2 . 1/6/2012
Hello, this was one helluva a chappie, damn girl you got some mad skils!
TomStus Unborn Baby chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
This was recommended to me, and I am nervous! But I am sure I will love it. You've got me on the first chapter. Can't wait for more. You are...amazing. Peace, out :)
Sister Wife 1 chapter 28 . 1/6/2012
OMFG! OMFG! THIS IS KILLING ME! YOU MUST UPDATE SOON! *CRYING!*
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