Reviews for Harry Potter and the Forests of Valbonë
majere4 chapter 22 . 10/24/2024
"
"If everything's shaping up in preparation of a war, we'll give them one. Look at the last lot that underestimated you. How does your oik cloak fit? So I say, lets show them why they call me Sternley Erwin Charlemagne Douglas MacArthur the Third!"
"
*boggles*
I...
*shakes head slowly*
nope, got nuthin
majere4 chapter 21 . 10/24/2024
"
"Harry," said a cool, collected voice in his head.

It was a voice that he was intimately familiar with, but couldn't quite place.
"
Uhmmm... Tom? wtf? Now, has Harry been hearing Tom from time to time through his life, or is Harry remembering Diarymort's voice?
Also, would Harry's increasingly incredible grasp on higher magics be due to some form of weakening of the barrier keeping the scarcrux from influencing him?
majere4 chapter 20 . 10/24/2024
"
Mr. Weasley clearly hadn't been working from a single unified source
"
I wonder... the Weasley family clock is quite the feat of enchanting... is it possible that the feud between the Weasleys and the malfoi is due to the latter stealing the former's Binds?

"
Like the ability to jettison projectiles through the headlights.
"
007 it is!

"
This time yesterday, he'd been fighting. Or perhaps just about to fight. It seemed like a million years ago now. Another lifetime, perhaps. Perhaps it was just so absurd. Kill a pack of goblin-bred wizard-hunting wolves one day and start building a flying car the next.

But then, between horrible relatives, jumping on to school roofs, deadly Dark Wizards and deadlier giant snakes, when had his life ever been normal?
"
Ahhh, the joys of introspection of the life of a Heroic Character :D

"
Book Aid International
"
I'll check it out!
majere4 chapter 19 . 10/24/2024
"
He knew that for the first time, he'd really experienced just what it felt like to perform magic. He knew that each and every time before, he had been following someone else's guidelines, someone else's magic. It had been fluent and natural, but this time he'd had to force his magic along new pathways and he had felt the force of it resisting the change.
"
Ahhhh, the next (or will it wait until the final?) Arc is revealed :)

"
He felt as though he ought to say something. That was the thing to do at a funeral, wasn't it? Yet nothing sprang to mind. It would have been easier to say something about the lynx, but things had been so rushed and he hadn't had a chance. He remembered the words he'd said when it had died 'Thank you. I'm so sorry.'

Simple and sweet. That's how he should do it.

He stared solemnly at the grave.

"You fought well," he said, his voice low and respectful. "But not well enough."

He turned and walked away.
"
Excellent
majere4 chapter 18 . 10/24/2024
I wanted to ask, in your world, is Harry immune to Basilisk venom, just all snake venom's, or all venoms? Because the Sword of Gryffindor is imbued with anything powerful that it encounters and it definitely had Basilisk venom on the blade - which he used to cut himself.
That question aside, you did a brilliant job with the Training and Combat Arcs, I'm looking forward to the direction you take Harry, Hedwig, and Sternley from here.
majere4 chapter 17 . 10/24/2024
"
"Not taking the chance to see Helga in the bath," replied the hat in a distant tone, as though lost in through. "What a woman."
"
Hat really is quite wise using what is probably a raunchy truth to jar Harry out of any lingering nerves before they can get going.
majere4 chapter 16 . 10/24/2024
I'm really enjoying your Concepts of magic.

"
He thought it only fair; his mother's sacrifice had left a mark on his skin and so the lynx's sacrifice now also had its own mark. He'd wear both of them with pride, knowing that he had been loved and protected by both.
"
Beautiful. This is one of the reasons that I gravitate towards Harry Potter. It is simply so easy to write these scenes for his character, and so believable to read them.
majere4 chapter 15 . 10/24/2024
"
"
Harry knew that pointing this out embarrassed his friend
"
I wonder how they'll be able to keep their friendship going once they return? It could be one of the best friendships Harry could hope for... I wonder if there are stories with MoD Harry and Hat going on into time?

"
"After all," he said. "How will the enemy have any idea what's going on if you don't?"
"
I mean... fair? :D
majere4 chapter 14 . 10/24/2024
"
In that moment, then and there, Harry resolved that he would not leave Valbonë until the oik was in the ground and he was wearing its hide as a cape.
"
Well done.
majere4 chapter 13 . 10/24/2024
"
I just asked myself 'why am I frightened? Because I'm afraid of dying?' And then I realised that I shouldn't be. Because I'm already dead.

"Until I get out of this forest, I'm dead. And until that time— Well, fear is only going to kill me faster."
"
Yeah, that's rough. Full on accurate, but rough all the same.

Got some dust in my eyes.
Rest in Peace Mrow.

It was an excellent reminder that magic cannot fix everything even as it breaks his heart all over again in a new but just as painful way.
majere4 chapter 12 . 10/24/2024
A very simple chapter, yet one that clearly shows Harry's maturation, and his unfortunately necessary ability to quell his own very rational, very reasonable fears. If one of his biggest assets was the ability to react quickly under pressure, it will be just as valuable to learn to stop and think before reaction is his only recourse.
majere4 chapter 11 . 10/24/2024
Hedwig, HELP!
majere4 chapter 10 . 10/24/2024
"
But Harry couldn't help but wonder if he had been. Couldn't help but wonder how he'd taken this entire thing so easily in his stride. Couldn't help but wonder if this was a fleeting moment of sanity in a week long episode of insanity. Couldn't help but wonder if any of this was really real.
"
Nice. Terrifying, but nice.
majere4 chapter 9 . 10/24/2024
"
"It won't be that bad, but I do wonder where Arthur Weasley got the idea to enchant a car to fly."
"
Herbie? 007? Both? :D
majere4 chapter 5 . 10/24/2024
"
A/N: I apologise to those of you who think that things aren't progressing fast enough. They work at their own pace.
"
I apologize as well, first for my fellow readers whose idea of quality entertainment is Michael Bay and second because I realized that I'd missed a chapter - and the enigmatic shtojzovalle - entirely.
2,386 | « Prev Page 1 .. 2 3 4 5 6 13 .. Last Next »