Reviews for Liar
shashautl chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Hello, dear. Sorry that it's been such a long time since I said I would be reviewing. I've been ridiculously busy.

Anyway, this was a very nice little story! You did a great job of capturing all the emotions that Winona would have had at that time. I especially enjoyed the last line, which was very effective. The only problem I can think of with your story was that some of the paragraphs seemed repetitive, instead of adding more material to Winona's sorrow. You WERE right to cut this short, since more material would have only been a waste of space. Most of the sentences were very effective.

I'm going to cut this review short, since I'm working with a new keyboard and my fingers are slipping all over the place. But anyway, thanks for the entry, and I'll be glad to finally announce the winners!