Reviews for "Escape from Hell's Kitchen"
Mary Harmon chapter 1 . 1/9/2005
Great story. But Bohemian Rhapsody goes "thunderbolt and lightning, very, very frightning." Not "thunder and lightning, very, very frightning.

I really love this story. It's so spooky.
Alien Angie chapter 3 . 8/21/2002
brilliant, you have the characters done nicely - the baddie was a little strange, like a 'Batman' type evil person, and the wolves were a little X-Fileish, but I love this story all the same!

Angie

xxxxx
mak4 chapter 3 . 5/19/2002
Not bad-it had a good plot, and it was really easy to get in to. And even though it was long, it went by fast. But the last chapter got kind of... weird? The whole underground-secret-city-super-soldier thing was kind of unrealistic. Oh yeah, I don't think Al would tell the real David the truth about PQL so easily-they usually try to avoid telling them at all if they can. But overall it was really good.
Holli chapter 3 . 4/27/2002
Great story! I like the plot and the charaterizattions were 'spot on'. A few 'dose's instead of 'does's. but, who's picky? Good work!
technetium chapter 3 . 4/25/2002
nice job. Very island of Dr. Moreau-ish. I'm glad Sam helped the wolves.
J-Chan5 chapter 2 . 4/24/2002
...i still think it's awesome but ure seriously biting from the book jurassic park
technetium chapter 2 . 4/23/2002
this is great, keep going
Irelandblue chapter 2 . 4/23/2002
Oh My Gosh! This sotroy is sooo exciting! I can't wait until the next chapter! Please hurry! don't leave Sam falling into an abys!
J-Chan5 chapter 1 . 4/21/2002
this story is great u have got to write more
technetium chapter 1 . 4/19/2002
That was excellent! I am intrigued by this story and I hope you continue soon. The disappearing wolves are scary. I was listening to the Jurassic Park soundtrack while I was reading this, and the suspense was killing me. You have to write more!