Reviews for crossover of the machines of two differnt worlds
Ron chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
I like the story and the concept. The only problem I see is you could use " at the beginning of a characters dialogue and after. It will help readers know when you are narrating the story and when the characters are speaking. Other than that it is a good story
crazywolf1991 chapter 4 . 8/4/2012
hey guys wulfreign here i changed my name from crazywolf to wulf but if yall read i dont care if yall review or not even though it is appreciated i will like to here any results and stuff but dont disect my story i understand when yall cough i dont expect this story to be awesome since i am an amateur author but also critics united if yall do review i appreciate it if you might tone it down maybe one peg and stuff not that i expect yall to read lol
Black Ace 0 chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
Adding to faves.
Nauran chapter 4 . 1/18/2012
...(cough cough).