Reviews for Their Mistake
excessivelyperky chapter 2 . 9/28/2013
"I'm sorry." I glared at him. He knows I hate it when he apologizes for Tuney being mean.

-Yes, and she hates it when he says anything about Tuney, or drops a branch on her. Is there anything he does that she likes?

And James and Sirius start out their obnoxious selves. But she only has to wait till they do something to Severus which is worse than water and chocolate sauce. Then she'll think that was funny.
Tarkaneea chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
Hmm... very interesting. I've never been interested in the early life of Lily, Petunia, and Severus, but you may have changed my mind...

nice first chapter.