Reviews for The War At Home |
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![]() ![]() ![]() a most awesome auggie story! can't wait for the ending! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I want to kill Tomacek as soon as I start reading this chapter. But, hey, you did it for me though differently. And I can see it's coming to an end soon :( But I hope that's just me. Looking forward to the next chapter! H |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm still really enjoying this! It is moving at a good pace and keeping things interesting. Thanks for the update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah a long chapter, but ahh man a cliff hanger. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a wonderful update. I can't believe all the plot, action and dialog you crammed into that. I really enjoyed it. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great! It's all coming together now. Good to get some background on Ross - shades of grey are far more realistic than the simple black and white. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter - whenever it may be ready :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a good story! I love getting the updates for this (especially since I am SO far behind in watching the newest season)! However, I do need to tell you for medical completeness, that giving extremely high doses of barbituates and diazepams lead to respiratory collapse which lead to respiratory failure (which ultimately leads to cardiac failure) and death. So, likely the way that you have this chapter set up, would probably not actually happen because Auggie would have gone into respiratory collapse and would need intubation and mechanical ventilation to keep him alive. For what you did though, it does help with your plot and keeps for an entertaining chapter! Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ugh! Another fantastic cliffhanger, you sure love to torture your fans, no pun intended! This chapter was amazingly written, I felt for Auggie, hard in this chapter! Annie's parallel joinery to save him is equally compelling I'm psyched for your next installment, this story is shaping up to be really entertaining! |
![]() ![]() Wow! This was a very exciting chapter with a definite cliff hanger. Hope all goes well with Auggie, the Dr. who grew a conscious and Annie and the Seal Team. Really a great job with plot lines and dialog. Thank you for a very delightful read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait to get more. Great story. Got some got twists and turns. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. That was a heck of a chapter. Lot in there. This story, and your telling of it just gets better and better. Well done. |
![]() ![]() Oh, boy. Auggie's in for it now! Good chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() SHIT! They got Auggie to talk. Well, as much as I didn't want it to happen, he isn't superman so he had to talk eventually. I wonder what the fall out is going to be from this, especially since Wilcox now knows they're closing in. I have a feeling that the doctor isn't going to be walking away from this. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter. If you don't update before the end of the month, Happy Halloween! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa great twist! Your story is defiantly giving my Covert Affairs fix until it's Fall premiere on the 16th! Once again you captured Auggie's inner thoughts and feelings amazingly well. I also loved how you write the world of Covert Affairs it so accurate and realistic! Please update soon this story is my life blood LOL! |
![]() ![]() This is a great story. I do hope you are going to finish it. |