Reviews for Luminescence
Guest chapter 36 . 9/3
wow! I just finished this. it was great. I skipped all the voldie drama because my heart just can't handle that angst. but I really loved their relationship. and the sex. that was great. my only issue is the lack of prep and stretching. and protection charms. but other than that I loved this a lot.
Guest chapter 3 . 5/14
very interesting! ah well my last review didn't post for some reason in chapter 2 but anyway, enjoying the story despite little things here and there that don't make sense but that is more about the background stuff, the interaction between Draco and Harry has been splendid so far but I do wonder when Draco is going to let up xD I am finding it very hard to warm up to him like Harry is and kinda baffled just like him why he is in the first place lol I know myself would have told him fuck off long time, Harry is showing great restraint than I would cx
Either way I keep reminding myself too this is not but a couple few months after the battle so can't expect a 180 personality change like other fics do, they usually have more than a good couple years for Malfoy to mature a tad before meeting up with Harry
Guest chapter 2 . 5/14
interesting story so far! I was confused why they couldn't Apparate when they first meet up and their brooms where broken but I must have missed somewhere the reason they couldn't, probably cause of the unfamiliar land and they had to take train and broom to their destination thou idk why portkey anyone? but whatever fact is they were forced to work together which is the point cx at the end there in this 2nd chapter I am confused why they must work together if they can't stand each other still at this point? I know harry is warming up to Draco but Draco is still to much a prat right now and you keep mentioning other researchers a lot so I thought Harry would try to partner with someone else cause of the danger and is not like the boss is forcing them? unless I missed something again xD whatever I shuts up cause we want them to work together, idk why I am nit picking the little things cx
sapphire80 chapter 5 . 5/14
sighs and wonders why I am reading this xD eyes chapter and word count and hope cause its long story things warm up cause so far about ready to fling Malfoy off a cliff
sapphire80 chapter 3 . 5/14
very interesting! ah well my last review didn't post cause for some reason wasn't logged in sigh but idk if it did cause I hit send both times and it said it went through so sorry in advance for any double or triple post of the same thing but anyway, enjoying the story despite little things here and there that don't make sense but that is more about the background stuff, the interaction between Draco and Harry has been splendid so far but I do wonder when Draco is going to let up xD I am finding it very hard to warm up to him like Harry is and kinda baffled just like him why he is in the first place lol I know myself would have told him fuck off long time, Harry is showing great restraint than I would cx
Either way I keep reminding myself too this is not but a couple few months after the battle so can't expect a 180 personality change like other fics do, they usually have more than a good couple years for Malfoy to mature a tad before meeting up with Harry
Bianca Di Angelo 0 chapter 36 . 3/18
I'm crying tears of joy right now.
Bianca Di Angelo 0 chapter 33 . 3/18
oh thank god
Bianca Di Angelo 0 chapter 32 . 3/18
your kidding me
Bianca Di Angelo 0 chapter 29 . 3/18
Oh no! It's an INTERVENTION!
Bianca Di Angelo 0 chapter 18 . 3/13
COME ON!
Bianca Di Angelo 0 chapter 15 . 3/13
awww someone told me to read this and i am soooo glad i did
Bianca Di Angelo 0 chapter 8 . 3/13
eeeeppppp this is adorable
atlantis51 chapter 10 . 2/29
I have always been CONFUSED why Harry is even still friends with Ron, who is a total imbecile! And disloyal to boot, which he has proved more then once! ARGH!
Guest chapter 17 . 12/24/2015
Ok let me tell you exactly what needs to happen at this point. Harry Potter and Draco Malfoy have to bing watch Pretty Little Liars. Why? Because they need to start being suspicious of EVERYTHING THAT BREATHES. I don't know if Jace or whoever else is a part of the evilness going on but even if they aren't it wouldn't hurt to not tell them anything. At all.

Harry just told TWO people about him and Dracos relationship. One of them he doesn't know at all. Voldermort could access that information and somehow use it against him. Jace could willingly give Voldermort that information. YOU DON'T KNOW THAT HE WON'T DUMB HARRY STUPID. *repeatedly hits harry with a book*
Guest chapter 4 . 7/15/2015
I know my reading this is a bit postponed, but I really enjoy how this story is in exact relays of the originals series. With an exception of Hedwig. I find it surprisingly startling that you kept her alive. Other than that, wonderful. Absolutely brilliant so far.
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