Reviews for Luminescence
LingeringShadows88 chapter 36 . 9/2/2017
I enjoyed everything about this book. Admittedly, I was a bit wary of this book turning cliche at first but the plot had turned out to be very interesting. I liked how you wrote their adventures in detail, everything clicked together which made it much more enjoyable. There had been few grammar mistakes but it was overshadowed by the lack of mistakes thus I cannot complain. I loved this story, thank you for your amazing work.
AccioMagic35 chapter 36 . 8/2/2017
I love this story so much it may be the first time I read a fanfic twice. You did GREAT. Was so sad to end it
Guest chapter 36 . 9/3/2016
wow! I just finished this. it was great. I skipped all the voldie drama because my heart just can't handle that angst. but I really loved their relationship. and the sex. that was great. my only issue is the lack of prep and stretching. and protection charms. but other than that I loved this a lot.
Guest chapter 3 . 5/14/2016
very interesting! ah well my last review didn't post for some reason in chapter 2 but anyway, enjoying the story despite little things here and there that don't make sense but that is more about the background stuff, the interaction between Draco and Harry has been splendid so far but I do wonder when Draco is going to let up xD I am finding it very hard to warm up to him like Harry is and kinda baffled just like him why he is in the first place lol I know myself would have told him fuck off long time, Harry is showing great restraint than I would cx
Either way I keep reminding myself too this is not but a couple few months after the battle so can't expect a 180 personality change like other fics do, they usually have more than a good couple years for Malfoy to mature a tad before meeting up with Harry
Guest chapter 2 . 5/14/2016
interesting story so far! I was confused why they couldn't Apparate when they first meet up and their brooms where broken but I must have missed somewhere the reason they couldn't, probably cause of the unfamiliar land and they had to take train and broom to their destination thou idk why portkey anyone? but whatever fact is they were forced to work together which is the point cx at the end there in this 2nd chapter I am confused why they must work together if they can't stand each other still at this point? I know harry is warming up to Draco but Draco is still to much a prat right now and you keep mentioning other researchers a lot so I thought Harry would try to partner with someone else cause of the danger and is not like the boss is forcing them? unless I missed something again xD whatever I shuts up cause we want them to work together, idk why I am nit picking the little things cx
sapphire80 chapter 5 . 5/14/2016
sighs and wonders why I am reading this xD eyes chapter and word count and hope cause its long story things warm up cause so far about ready to fling Malfoy off a cliff
sapphire80 chapter 3 . 5/14/2016
very interesting! ah well my last review didn't post cause for some reason wasn't logged in sigh but idk if it did cause I hit send both times and it said it went through so sorry in advance for any double or triple post of the same thing but anyway, enjoying the story despite little things here and there that don't make sense but that is more about the background stuff, the interaction between Draco and Harry has been splendid so far but I do wonder when Draco is going to let up xD I am finding it very hard to warm up to him like Harry is and kinda baffled just like him why he is in the first place lol I know myself would have told him fuck off long time, Harry is showing great restraint than I would cx
Either way I keep reminding myself too this is not but a couple few months after the battle so can't expect a 180 personality change like other fics do, they usually have more than a good couple years for Malfoy to mature a tad before meeting up with Harry
Anna Mara chapter 36 . 3/18/2016
I'm crying tears of joy right now.
Anna Mara chapter 33 . 3/18/2016
oh thank god
Anna Mara chapter 32 . 3/18/2016
your kidding me
Anna Mara chapter 29 . 3/18/2016
Oh no! It's an INTERVENTION!
Anna Mara chapter 18 . 3/13/2016
COME ON!
Anna Mara chapter 15 . 3/13/2016
awww someone told me to read this and i am soooo glad i did
Anna Mara chapter 8 . 3/13/2016
eeeeppppp this is adorable
WeisseHex chapter 10 . 2/29/2016
I have always been CONFUSED why Harry is even still friends with Ron, who is a total imbecile! And disloyal to boot, which he has proved more then once! ARGH!
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