Reviews for Icebergs
MissyMarauderette chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
Aww! :) adorable. I can't believe I over-looked his comment in the book about her cold feet!

Cute piece!
ZeDancingHobbit chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
Awwwww! That was adorable(: Definitely very Walter-ish.
The Hobbit's Rhapsody chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Ah, so sweet! This made me smile. You brought out their characters rather well for only a few dozen words of dialogue.
Dovewings.of.Narnia chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
Daw, Walter/Ashley! Too adorable. :) Only thing I might change... at first, I thought the "..." were meant to be breaks, as in "Next night". But then I realized they were only pauses. However, I liked the format of only having dialogue and nothing else, so... I think it's okay. The fic is really cute, either way. (:
Outlaw's Daughter chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
Yay, another DioM story! Very cute :)

Good for a first try. The only thing I would suggest is working on the flow.