|Reviews for Great, Not Another Field Trip|
| reader chapter 8 . 6/25/2014
Poor gohan haha can't wait to see the next chapter PLZ don't stop writing and hurry
| Lokina odinsdottir chapter 8 . 6/13/2014
Awe How cute!
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/1/2014
Stop with the sappy parts and the great evil make more interaction of them and sayians. Go to school get bullied make his tail grow backe etc. king vegeta finds out bulma is vegetasei mate and trunks etc. same with bardock
| bloody-rose-love chapter 8 . 9/10/2013
AWESOME PLZ MAKE MORE CHAPS XD XD XD XD
| Crystalzap chapter 8 . 1/20/2013
really Gohan doesn't cry like that, he is stronger than that since Piccolo. You could have picked another way for them to bond, thats the fact your OC 'gin' is mean, and dominate over Gohan, well those are my pet peeves.
Otherwise I liked the story, Raditz being a girl was a little weird though. I wish Gohan's tail would grow back too, that'd be interesting, and getting rid of that bracelet...
| dragon-game chapter 8 . 1/8/2013
I hope you continue it.
| RedEYES-Fallen chapter 6 . 8/10/2012
When I read the summary I thought this would be a wonderfull story.
I was wrong (just my opinion, not bashing or anything)
I really liked the first chapters -ignoring the gramm mistakes- but then too much stuff begon to change.
I mean, Radditz? A girl? A caring aunt? How OOC can you get?
Ang Vegeta not going to Planet Vegeta? He would be the first to be there claiming he's their almighty prince!
Well, I guess here end my review, sorry that it is not a positive one.
But I really wish you luck with your story.
| Xana100 chapter 8 . 8/4/2012
...It pains me to say this to a very, VERY well thought-out FF, but... I don't like it as much as I should be liking it.
Main reason why? Grammar. That and your writing style. Please, for the love of... Well... Just... Please use past tense. I'm not sure if you're used to reading novels that portray actions using present, but please... Use past tense for actions characters are doing. It made reading this fan fic hard because it was in present. I'm pretty sure any novel sticks with using past tense when portraying action so I don't see why you shouldn't either.
As for grammar... Punctuation. I see plenty of run-ons and a few fragments. Remedy them with periods at right spots, word them differently, or use semi-colons. You seem to have trouble with tense too. English is tough, even for a native speaker. If you need more help, don't be afraid to PM me.
| serenityselena chapter 8 . 7/26/2012
Gohan has bottled up many emotions and in this way he release some of them...
eagerly awaiting to read more :)
| KKsaiyancat chapter 8 . 7/25/2012
I liked the bonding time! I did!
But i have 2 questions...1st. Where is Vegeta? The canon Vegeta, i mean. 2nd...WHAT ABOUT TRUNKS AND GOTEN!
You should make the two randomly appear while they meet with King Vegeta...And only Bulma and Gohan know who they are! I bet the reactions would be along the lines of...
Gohan- NOOO! There going to kill me! Get them away!
Bulma- Trunks! Where did you come from! I told you to stay on Earth!
Trunks- Whoops. I forgot *Sarcasm*
Goten- We aren't supposed to be here?
You MUST add them!
Neways, great job!
| SeanHicks4 chapter 8 . 7/25/2012
Interesting chapter...this new femRaditzu with her softer reations can still suprise me at times...
| ultranx chapter 8 . 7/25/2012
epic so far, can't wait to see what happens next
| Shijiro chapter 8 . 7/25/2012
well nice chapter.
a lot of things are still wierd. like bulma keeping the fact that she's married to vegeta a secret and why isn't vegeta there with them. his planet is back and he didn't go see it for himself. even afterall the talk of him being he prince of all saiyans. i somewhat understand gohan trying to keep a low profile, but bulma has no reason to. but that being said im looking forward to gohan showing off a bit and revealing that he is the strongest (if not second only to broly) being on planet vegeta, even though he's only half saiyan
| WalkersCrown chapter 6 . 7/25/2012
Thanks for prior warning raditz being female was weird enough but the Shonen Ai or whatever nahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh not a chance in hell you ruined what i though could have been a great story!
| jisko2ijsko chapter 7 . 7/9/2012
LOL! bulma is meeting king vegeta XD LOLOLOLOL!
i like this story!
wonder if a saiyan will see that gohan is also one :P