Reviews for Great, Not Another Field Trip
rainne.2000.16 chapter 8 . 9/10/2016
This has been interesting and I hope you will come back to this story and finish it. I would really like to know how everything turns out.
prince Vegeta chapter 8 . 5/23/2016
Secret.Identities chapter 1 . 5/16/2016
Uhh... Head Scientist and Teacher? Whut?
It's too weird imagining someone who looks just like Goku be smart. That's feels really messed up. Genius Goku! HUH? Haha
gabelou1991 chapter 8 . 7/2/2015
J'adore l'idée des voyages.
reader chapter 8 . 6/25/2014
Poor gohan haha can't wait to see the next chapter PLZ don't stop writing and hurry
Yoko-Kiryuu Bikutoria Kurama chapter 8 . 6/13/2014
Awe How cute!
Guest chapter 8 . 3/1/2014
Stop with the sappy parts and the great evil make more interaction of them and sayians. Go to school get bullied make his tail grow backe etc. king vegeta finds out bulma is vegetasei mate and trunks etc. same with bardock
TheBigBadWolf101 chapter 8 . 9/10/2013
Crystalzap chapter 8 . 1/20/2013
really Gohan doesn't cry like that, he is stronger than that since Piccolo. You could have picked another way for them to bond, thats the fact your OC 'gin' is mean, and dominate over Gohan, well those are my pet peeves.

Otherwise I liked the story, Raditz being a girl was a little weird though. I wish Gohan's tail would grow back too, that'd be interesting, and getting rid of that bracelet...
dragon-game chapter 8 . 1/8/2013
Good story.
I hope you continue it.
RedEYES-Fallen chapter 6 . 8/10/2012
When I read the summary I thought this would be a wonderfull story.
I was wrong (just my opinion, not bashing or anything)
I really liked the first chapters -ignoring the gramm mistakes- but then too much stuff begon to change.
I mean, Radditz? A girl? A caring aunt? How OOC can you get?
Ang Vegeta not going to Planet Vegeta? He would be the first to be there claiming he's their almighty prince!
Well, I guess here end my review, sorry that it is not a positive one.
But I really wish you luck with your story.
Xana100 chapter 8 . 8/4/2012
...It pains me to say this to a very, VERY well thought-out FF, but... I don't like it as much as I should be liking it.

Main reason why? Grammar. That and your writing style. Please, for the love of... Well... Just... Please use past tense. I'm not sure if you're used to reading novels that portray actions using present, but please... Use past tense for actions characters are doing. It made reading this fan fic hard because it was in present. I'm pretty sure any novel sticks with using past tense when portraying action so I don't see why you shouldn't either.

As for grammar... Punctuation. I see plenty of run-ons and a few fragments. Remedy them with periods at right spots, word them differently, or use semi-colons. You seem to have trouble with tense too. English is tough, even for a native speaker. If you need more help, don't be afraid to PM me.
serenityselena chapter 8 . 7/26/2012
nicely done...
Gohan has bottled up many emotions and in this way he release some of them...
eagerly awaiting to
KKsaiyancat chapter 8 . 7/25/2012
I liked the bonding time! I did!
But i have 2 questions...1st. Where is Vegeta? The canon Vegeta, i mean. 2nd...WHAT ABOUT TRUNKS AND GOTEN!

You should make the two randomly appear while they meet with King Vegeta...And only Bulma and Gohan know who they are! I bet the reactions would be along the lines of...

Gohan- NOOO! There going to kill me! Get them away!
Bulma- Trunks! Where did you come from! I told you to stay on Earth!
Trunks- Whoops. I forgot *Sarcasm*
Goten- We aren't supposed to be here?

You MUST add them!
Neways, great job!
SeanHicks4 chapter 8 . 7/25/2012
Interesting chapter...this new femRaditzu with her softer reations can still suprise me at times...
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