|Reviews for Clenched Soul|
| raiyana chapter 19 . 10/7/2014
Quite sad that you never wrote the third fate. You have a way with the written word which is pretty impressive. A gift for evoking imagery without making yourself seem corny or repetitive. I am saddened by the lack of more stories on here and I hope that you have merely discontinued publishing your work for a, hopefully brief, interlude. Even if you never return to the world of fanfiction, I hope that someone out there gets to enjoy the words of your imagination. Best wishes, Raiyana
| POTTERPHILE chapter 19 . 7/13/2014
Lovely Lovely Lovely... I so enjoyed this story. The build up was just right. I hate when it is written like a porno flick... you know... fifteen words and somebody is putting something into somewhere... on the other hand.. its no good when they dance around each other for a couple thousand words and moan and groan about how they feel about it... glad you helped Ron grow up... Glad to se Sev get a little respect... hate lucius and draco is just a little piss ant... Do you remember the old Smokey and The Bandit movies... makes me think of the father son in those movies...Neruda was a delight and I would love to know more about her.. I know that I will be puzzling over her for a while... thats good writing... Now I must apologize for not being logged in... I am on my kindle and it is such a total bear to log in... Thank you for sharing your work.. when I get back on my laptop this will be favorited.
| blisblop chapter 19 . 12/3/2013
That was wonderful, uplifting and sensual,The eclectic quotes were artfully employed.I really adored use of the Delphi was was smooth and really added weight to the idea of these two was delightfully intelligent and had deftly handled morals.I paused more then a few times reading this to consider what was evoked. The sex was (Respect!) believable and tense , the girls reaction to it realistic and remarkably you, this must have taken alot of thought and I hope you think it was worth it because I in my top three for this section.I've adored Mr Rickman's sly exuberance and knee weakening voice since I saw him in Robin Hood, and chanced through a youtube viewing of Snape's death a visit to this writing like this makes my last few months gobbling this pairing worth . thanks.
| SectumSeverus chapter 19 . 7/22/2013
I loved this story! It was so original, I honestly do t think I have read another fic quite like it. I hope you keep writing stories because I found this to be awesome!
| GregoryWilson chapter 18 . 7/16/2013
I love this story. Third time I have read it and can't get enough.
| grassandsafetypinsandthings chapter 19 . 2/10/2013
OH MY FUCKING GOSH! (sorry) But wow this story was beyond perfect i mean i can't even describe it! You are a magnificent writer and this was just beyond perfect :D Thank you
| Ty M chapter 5 . 1/6/2013
"It is better to be violent if there is violence in our hearts than to put on the cloak of non-violence to cover impotence." -Mahatma Gandhi
| wrestlefan4 chapter 19 . 11/9/2012
"Harry Potter. You have roughly twenty seconds before I flip you over and debase you. Is this the way you wish to spend your allotted foreplay time?" :D
Very good story. I do hope you write the third one also. I am anxiously awaiting. :)
| wrestlefan4 chapter 17 . 11/9/2012
Snape...lol. I laughed so hard when he just suddenly outed them. Why does Harry also have to be so damn slow, always? The thing with Neruda's hair is just like how long it took him figure out how to open the egg for the TriWizard tournament when it was easy enough to figure out. Harry. HARRY. -_-
Anyway, I haven't commented up until now, but I laughed so hard at Snape outing them, that I wanted to now. "A Drop in The Ocean" is still my favorite, but I am enjoying this story very much too. The aspect of Neruda certainly adds a different flavor to it.
Lucius... why do you always ruin things? Could you not be a bastard for once?
| devillish angel chapter 19 . 11/6/2012
hmmm different . i like . definitely like :D
| Ledybug chapter 19 . 10/30/2012
Great story! Hope you keep writing. :)
| GregoryWilson chapter 19 . 10/13/2012
One of my favorite stories. Thank you for writing it.
| GregoryWilson chapter 10 . 10/13/2012
For some reason this is the only time I have read some of your author's notes. I wanted to try and give you an alternate perspective of first time sex.
I am always thinking, the entire time, what happens after. Why am I doing this. It usually has to do with do I connect intellectually. Having been in love with someone I did not find sexually attractive, but mentally attractive, I can say it isn't always about the body.
Each movement I make while giving myself to another is a thought. If I kiss someone, I am telling them something with my kiss. If it is lust, the kiss changes than if it is love or intellectual. Every thought becomes a movement.
On the receiving end of things, I can tell when someone is with me for lust, intellect, or love. The sex changes. There is a complete disconnect when someone is with me for lust, and it always feels absolutely horrible afterwards. There is an exemption to this rule. If I know beyond a doubt someone loves me, I don't mind them taking me and ravishing me in lust, but if it is the first time, and it is only lust, it always feels bad afterwards.
Also, while I don't like men in stories or real men to be submissive, I find that everyone needs something else when they are with someone. That is what makes us compatible with different people.
I personally like my men to be just as strong as I am, but completely comfortable with themselves to give me control when I want it, just as I give them control when they want it. Sometimes fighting for the control is fun, but not in an abusive or controlling way, just in a "You're not going to win this time" way.
This has nothing to do with your story per-say, just my thoughts on your authors notes.
Author's Note: Very jumbled thoughts here.
| 13AkiraKuranXIII chapter 19 . 9/20/2012
Brilliant story! I love how Snape and Harry gang up on possible boyfriends of Neruda's. What a team!
| Guest chapter 19 . 7/10/2012
In fact, I'm pretty sure this is "funking" ;D