Reviews for Clenched Soul
Fenris Jin chapter 19 . 3/14
Poor Neruda.. That's the drawback of being a daddy's girl.. XD

Very, lovely, lovely story. I very much enjoyed the Snarry build up and the family themes. :)

Thank you for sharing this story! :)
Fenris Jin chapter 18 . 3/14
It's kind of cool that Aesa chose Severus as her master.. I actually kind of find it funny that she shoved her hand in Severus' face.. XD

Hmm.. I feel sad that Neruda is just referred to only as a construct, a vessel. But hey, Wall-E was just a recycling bot and that movie made me cry and laugh and appreciate life, so no, there really isn't anything she's lacking. As long as is still who Severus loved and who loved Severus, she very real to me and of course to her family. :)
Fenris Jin chapter 17 . 3/14
Oh em gee.. I hate you Lucy.. and here I thought you've changed. You too Draco.. How could you? Huhu.,

On the side note, Lucy really is obsessed with hair isn't he? Everyone must have pretty hair. Maybe that's why he betrayed Severus and Harry. xD
Fenris Jin chapter 16 . 3/14
Poor narcoleptic drunk.. his wanton needs were not satisfied.. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 15 . 3/14
This is a yummy chapter. I must say, Severus is a natural Top. I'm sure Harry would be happy to leave him with the role. XD

The bit about Neruda's family made me teary. I think I clogged my nose a bit from trying not to cry. Oh Cassie.
Fenris Jin chapter 13 . 3/14
More experiments! XD

I love this. XD

Coincidentally, isn't it lucky that Neruda was a girl instead of a boy? It would have been far more awkward to see each other in the hallway like that otherwise.. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 12 . 3/14
I think Lucius is just being a concerned friend.. He's a bit shallow as all Malfoys tend to be. But he meant well.. I think. He just needs to learn that Neruda is family now.
Fenris Jin chapter 11 . 3/14
For a mystery/crime writer, Harry's prowess at Cluedo is disgraceful.. XD

Also, ironically, Neruda's ability to not see the future where she is involved is more detrimental to Severus and Harry's privacy.. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 10 . 3/14
Severus does have a point. If Harry expected cuddles and confessions on their first night, he's in for a world of disappointment. I'm afraid starting a relationship with Severus would be like pulling teeth.. After that hurdle though, I'm sure it'll be easier.. Neruda said so on their first dinner. XD

I kind of thought Neruda's Oracle song explained so much about Severus' reservation.. Too bad Harry didn't listen. Did he even remember the discussion with Hermione? XD

They're both emotionally stunted, only in reverse. Severus keeps it in, Harry lets it out.. That would certainly make things harder. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 9 . 3/14
Well, I bet it was a really happy Christmas for one Harry Potter. XD

That was a sweet chapter. I was a bit teary eyed when Neruda and Severus hugged when he gave her the guitar.. The feels! XD

Still though, Harry was quite cunning to give and take a last minute gift. He didn't get permission for that kiss! XD
Fenris Jin chapter 8 . 3/14
I was wondering about the Oracle's seer ability. That explains it. :D

I love how Neruda is match making. I wonder if her Oracle abilities clued her in about Snarry. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 7 . 3/14
Looks like Severus would have to bury two extra bodies in the back yard.. I wonder if Harry would help.. XD

So Neruda is The Oracle? Interesting. That should explain her gift as well as her importance to Voldemort. The Christmas events are going from bad to great to worst. I'm actually quite confused as to how they should handle this. XD

I also wonder what her Oracle powers are.
Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 3/14
This is a rather lovely story. :)

I must say that I like Neruda very much. It's almost a shame that she isn't blood related to Severus. She's a character on her own though, I probably would have just wanted to know who her mother was. Anyway. XD

The Snarry build is good too. I especially loved how they kicked each other's ass. Nothing more cathartic than having it out with people you have issues with, especially if one's is trying to move on from those issues.. So long as there's no permanent disability and death of course. XD
raiyana chapter 19 . 10/7/2014
Quite sad that you never wrote the third fate. You have a way with the written word which is pretty impressive. A gift for evoking imagery without making yourself seem corny or repetitive. I am saddened by the lack of more stories on here and I hope that you have merely discontinued publishing your work for a, hopefully brief, interlude. Even if you never return to the world of fanfiction, I hope that someone out there gets to enjoy the words of your imagination. Best wishes, Raiyana
POTTERPHILE chapter 19 . 7/13/2014
Lovely Lovely Lovely... I so enjoyed this story. The build up was just right. I hate when it is written like a porno flick... you know... fifteen words and somebody is putting something into somewhere... on the other hand.. its no good when they dance around each other for a couple thousand words and moan and groan about how they feel about it... glad you helped Ron grow up... Glad to se Sev get a little respect... hate lucius and draco is just a little piss ant... Do you remember the old Smokey and The Bandit movies... makes me think of the father son in those movies...Neruda was a delight and I would love to know more about her.. I know that I will be puzzling over her for a while... thats good writing... Now I must apologize for not being logged in... I am on my kindle and it is such a total bear to log in... Thank you for sharing your work.. when I get back on my laptop this will be favorited.
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