|Reviews for My Short Story Haven|
| slytherinsal chapter 9 . 1/28
I would like to see this one continued
| Tirla chapter 12 . 1/23
Unbelievably fantastic! Your writing is so enrapturing that I finished before I realized it. Every one of the 12 shorts are engaging and I am SO glad you shared them with us. Thank you! Anything you want to write, I want to read if you are interested in sharing it with anyone. If not, just know I, at least, feel blessed that I was able to read ANY of your writings.
Be well and happy with what you do.
| Guest chapter 12 . 1/19
You know the chapter 'The Importance of Loopholes' truth to be told I didn't like the plot for both of the Oneshots. Whilst I was reading 'The Importamce of Loopholes' I kept on thinking one way that Harry could've solved this is by calling Magic (or some kind of divine entity) and swearing an oath (that he has the right to ask; and that he hasn't done anything bad etc) asking back what was stolen from him (i.e. his blood, Title) and rendering the contract useless and those who did wrong and stole from him either dies or lose their magic. Still love the other plot bunnies though!
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/19
You know the chapter 'The Importance of Loopholes' truth to be told I didn't like the plot for both of the Oneshots. Whilst I was reading 'The Importamce of Loopholes' I kept on thinking one way that Harry could've solved this is by calling Magic (or some kind of divine entity) and swearing an oath (that he has the right to ask; and that he hasn't done anything bad etc) asking back what was stolen from him (i.e. his blood, Title) and rendering the contract useless and those who did wrong and stole from him iether dies or lose their magic.
| excessivelyperky chapter 7 . 12/27/2017
Ha, this is delightful! I'm glad that Snape realizes 'do something intelligent, Smee' means doing exactly what he is doing-packing up and joining the winning side (which would appear to be neither the Dark Lord or the Light one).
| Badbonita chapter 12 . 12/1/2017
And really no more needs to be written with this one - in my opinion.
Thanks for creating and posting these plot bunnies. They have been interesting and thought provoking. Some, I hope, may one day be expanded upon while others are good as you've already posted.
Again thank you.
| Badbonita chapter 10 . 11/30/2017
Feeling sorry for Hedwig - her human disappeared. . . . .
| Badbonita chapter 8 . 11/30/2017
Interesting punishment you have there for the Weasley women.
| DragonTamer01 chapter 12 . 11/23/2017
I'm sorry, but this chapter has convinced me that you have no soul. As such, I have lost ALL respect for you as a human being. Now I need to go binge-play the God Of War videogame franchise and forget that your stories EVEN EXIST!
| IceBlueRose chapter 12 . 10/28/2017
Oh the twins were such idiots! They know how little Harry knows about the wizarding world - or they should - so why on Earth would they think that was a good idea? Oy. And Fate and Destiny really are horrible, aren't they? Is it weird that I hope a tiny part of Harry Potter survived to go to the afterlife? It is. I just keep thinking of James and Lily waiting to meet their son one day in the afterlife and now that won't happen unless they meet him as Lucien. (I know, my brain is strange, lol.) But I like that he had a good life as Lucien Malfoy at least! I enjoyed all of these, thanks for sharing!
| IceBlueRose chapter 10 . 10/28/2017
First, I just want to say that I read your profile and I'm glad that you're getting back to writing for yourself. It's something I have to remind myself of plenty when I'm worrying over something and my friend is always the one to tell me, "As long as you're happy with it, who cares?" (Ironically, I do the same for her - I guess we both need to learn to take our own advice!) The pressure of readers wanting to know or guessing what will happen can be awful and so much pressure.
Second, I'm not looking to adopt this one and I know you said you were going to leave it unfinished but I was curious on which direction you'd been leaning towards since I was trying to decide for myself what I thought was the case in regards to James and Lily and whether they were complicit in this and really did abandon Harry or if they came to after being knocked out/believed to be dead and thought their son had been killed and left for parts unknown to start over (though how they would have missed the big to do over Sirius escaping, I don't know) and Dumbledore just took advantage of the lack of bodies to do as he pleased. No pressure to answer, of course, since I'm well aware that I'm dong the very thing that I said can be horrible pressure. I'll probably end up trying to figure out things for each option! Anyway, I'm enjoying these and now I'm off to finish the last two chapters.
| blinddivinity chapter 12 . 10/22/2017
What a great set of one-shots!
I can't wait to read more.
| HPTwilightGALover chapter 12 . 8/17/2017
Chapter 12 was cruel!
| Ginnylove9990 chapter 7 . 7/21/2017
This is one short story in which you to make a full story. Like who Ron is married to. And what will happen when the Malfoys protect him from the Dark Lord. Any chance that will happen? I hope so. I really hope so.
| mobulis chapter 7 . 7/7/2017
And then voldie kills the malfoys and harry.