|Reviews for Help|
| CharMeister505 chapter 1 . 5/19
one of best
| Weavileleader chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
I have always thought that Zoroark is Lucario's Generation V counterpart, so I like how you made them the main characters. Overall, I really like this story!
| Lumpycheez chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
I bet Mewtwo would do that to anyone who tried to take his place. XD
Anyways, I liked this! Random short stories are the best!
I like using Lucario in Brawl, but Sonic is definitely the best. It's so fun to be annoying with him XD
| Storm2013 chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
I really liked this, I loved how it went straight to action and how Lucario was really fighting for his life, before help came. And when help did come I love that it was in the form of Zoroark. That was such a neat idea! :D
| Dream the Fox chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
| funny-person-23 chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
So, yeah, again nice story and summary. I take that back. It was an AWESOME summary! "Lucario coughed. This time, he coughed up blood." It's so simple, so inticing, just so... just so perfect. It's annymous, so the reader wonders what you're talking about and it's a total K.O! Are checking the traffic on your stoies? I want to know you're total, so far.
Also, Eden, was "the Creature" an OC of some kind or what?
| fractalman chapter 1 . 8/15/2011