Reviews for Fictionista Witfit Challenge 5
kselzer chapter 5 . 12/5/2012
At least he eats healthy.
mamacat20 chapter 25 . 11/3/2011
B&E converted non-veggies, too cute. I liked that they were at a concert, these 2 didn't lock themselves away everyday and go at it. Well maybe they did but it was a cool view into them off on their own.
crystalight22 chapter 25 . 11/1/2011
loved the ending. Good luck with your writing and I'll say Happy Thanksgiving now too!
latuacantante4him chapter 25 . 11/1/2011
Love the ending. I'm going to miss you. Drop me a PM every once in a while to let me know how things are going. :)
MaraBenefici chapter 25 . 10/31/2011
I thought more of the other covens who come as witnesses, in BD, would have tried a"vegetarian"diet. They seemed civilized, and yet... have fun with NaNoWriMo. Seems all my writing friends, local and online, are participating. I got to be a vampire today... a hungry one. But it was subtle, black contacts, realistic fangs that were only noticeable if I smiled and my normal everyday clothes... Happy Halloween!
Melolabel chapter 25 . 10/31/2011
So these new vamps? Amish? Mennonite? Very biblical names. So she forgives him for biting her, she's met her own singer and let him live, and now they're kickin' around on their own? How long has it been since her change?
Melolabel chapter 24 . 10/29/2011
Hehe. Loved Tanya's commentary and Edwards reaction to it. I'm glad he feels a little abashed with his impetuosity but makes it relatable to what she is experiencing. Also loved how she just crashed through the window.
latuacantante4him chapter 24 . 10/27/2011
Imagination. *scoff* I want to read it. LOL! Enjoyed it.
MaraBenefici chapter 24 . 10/27/2011
BD'd again. ;-)
mamacat20 chapter 24 . 10/27/2011
*cue porn music - bow chicka wow wow!
mamacat20 chapter 23 . 10/26/2011
They really wasted no time. I was sure that they would of had a proper honeymoon first but I guess Edward wants her capable of handling their activities.
MaraBenefici chapter 23 . 10/26/2011
Oh Edward...
Melolabel chapter 23 . 10/26/2011
Good morning again! Well that was certainly an exercise in either failure or success. He totally failed at a positive first sexual experience. But he didn't kill her when he bit her. that's good news for her. Wonder if Alice will yell at him.

You needed Sue for research on this one. Did he really fly a bi plane? That's one of those old timely planes with the two wings, open air seats-one behind the other, like the barnstormers flew in WWII. You might want to consider changing that to a small Sesna or some other two seater jet.
latuacantante4him chapter 23 . 10/26/2011
Well, that didn't go as planned. At least he had enough control to not drain her. :)
Melolabel chapter 22 . 10/26/2011
Hard to say if I'd agree or not since it's such an "out there" concept. But I'm glad things panned out the way they did in this situation. Love Charlie in all his many iterations.
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