|Reviews for I Don't Put Up With Her I Love Her|
| Same author chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
i agree witht he last reviewer i LOVED Mike Big Brother Best Friend and you showed so much emotion and described actions and feelings so well i almost wonder if u are the same author.
anyone who doubts your ability should read that story. if u doubt your ability you should reread that story. and write like u did there. don't just say what happened. show us.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
Your stories have some really cute moments and cute ideas, but the characters are usually out of character. I do not doubt that Beck loves Jade, but he is quiet and mysterious and I don't think he would say that to Tori. They seem to keep their sweet, romantic moments to themselves.
Try adding more details and writing longer stories. They are so short and don't give any background information.
"Tori was annoyed after Jade had insulted her and Beck didn't respond,"
So describe it. Just saying that makes it seem like you don't have any ideas to write about. Describe what Jade said, how Tori or Beck felt, etc.
| Random Storygirl chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
That was cute. :)
| Jeremy Shane chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
| Boris Yeltsin chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
Tori's probably confused right now.