|Reviews for The Return|
| Lee Peacock chapter 3 . 3/18
Please rewrite this story
| G the Headmaster chapter 3 . 5/26/2016
Too bad that you terminated the story. It was very good!
| Jof3 chapter 3 . 11/20/2015
I have enjoyed the story so far and wish it were not ending. I also know that writing something your heart isn't in would only diminish the finished story. While I wish the story were continued, I respect that it needed to end when it did. Keep up the good work.
| dragonlordrb chapter 2 . 5/9/2012
I am sorry that you decided to drop this story. I need to read its predecessor to find the full spectrum of the plot, but concidering that you are the author, I expect it to be good. For my walking in, in what seems to be meant to be the middle of the story, I was stunned. It was enjoyable.
As ever, may your quills be sharp, and your mind be storyfied.
| Stephanie O chapter 3 . 12/26/2011
Oh, say it ain't so, Joe...er, Ollie! Please? I was just getting into this story! And no, don't try to pass it onto me, because I've not done well at taking over Twinsanity anyway. I could give you a few ideas, but I have no idea how to write it. This should really be continued, though. Just saying...
| Stephanie O chapter 2 . 12/26/2011
Loved the love letter from Charlie! I thought it was perfectly sappy, syrupy sweet, gushy, mushy, and all that fluffy stuff. Also liked Molly's Aphrodite reference for Ginny...I wonder if Harry will be the 'god' for her? ;)
| Who Are You What Do You Want chapter 3 . 8/20/2011
tears tears tears tears tears. I was just getting into it. Will love seeing whatever you write my older brother.
| MaeSilverpaws1 chapter 3 . 8/20/2011
| Jim Red Hawk chapter 3 . 8/20/2011
You will not write it for even me? I KNOW I never review much, but it gets hard trying to remember what I wanted to say. :( I am sorry bout that also. :(
| flight.of.the.phoenix.86 chapter 3 . 8/20/2011
aaaawwwwww...too bad!...i was enjoying it!
| MaeSilverpaws1 chapter 2 . 8/18/2011
"Poor" Al got his butt handed to him on a gold platter it seems. Good for him he needs to be brought down a few pegs every once in a while. :0)
Well with Remus with Lily I guess it makes sense that Tonks would need someone else... Charlie is a good match for her.
So does Ginny have her cap set for Harry?
Really enjoying this story
| Who Are You What Do You Want chapter 2 . 8/18/2011
Now now older brother how could you deny Tonks her love? What did she do to you? The golden 12 how did you know i was born on the 12 of a month. And I'm not cleaning up the robes of Moody. Have one of the 12 do it. Nice chapter by the way.
| flight.of.the.phoenix.86 chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
u made ur first mistake in first paragraph...the Elite Four are in Ravenclaw not Gryffindor!
| fred aholic chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
Nice chapter Ollie :)
I like how you have retold they key points and your idea of how to do it. I am sorry I cant continue it with you but am happy to see where you take the story.
| Luiz4200 chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
I wonder how the Wizarding World would react to Lily being alive.