Reviews for Breaking the Wall
tuujo chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
I liked reading this, the story has good, steady pace and the characters felt natural.
Reading abbreviation such as "FYI" feels unnatural though, I had to stop reading and look up what it means. Their place is in chats and text messages, not stories.
Loreyulia chapter 1 . 6/16/2015
I really enjoyed your depictions of Shion and Nezumi! This fic was sweet, sexy, and all around a great read! Thank you for sharing :)
Guest chapter 1 . 5/13/2015
Daphmir57 chapter 1 . 7/12/2014
Oh my. Ohhhh myyy. I enjoyed that veries much. Veries much. Ands remembers, don'ts apologizies fors somethings yous enjoyed!
Mist1029 chapter 1 . 4/24/2014
Great job! It was really in character
Kensy Echo chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
I'm ... speechless ... I don't understand why all of your NO.6 FFns are so beautifull. It's like you are Asano Atsuko's herself. The character, the sweet feeling in the story, as if it is a classic music played for my ears to hear and my heart to feel. Again, I'd like to say that I love your beautiful diction and writing style. It's as if every theme of story will turn out to be really amazing in your hand. I know my sentences seem so disgusting and cheesy but those are honest from my heart. No.6 is the best novel I've ever read and here you manage to build the nearly same feeling just like in the real novel. Shion is such an innocent boy. And I love how Nezumi tries to deceive his true feeling for him.

... and I love the ending's sentences.

Keep writing!

Ophis chapter 1 . 10/16/2013
This is one of my favorite stories (if not my favorite) for this pairing. Each one of Nezumi's thoughts and each one of Shion's reactions are just perfect.

You did this pairing justice, I'm glad I got to read this. Congratsulations.
PurpleSong chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
The was so dark that it broke my heart and I didn't cry, but that's I good thing cause I don't think that was the intention with it :3 it did move my heart though and I found it really sweet and loveable X3
LunarStar98 chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
love it...yeah, and it's Hot too...really really like it a lot, no wait love definently...very Hot
iBleed Rainbowz chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
Boizun chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
OMG sooo goood :'D The last line had me squealing.
BeyondMyReach chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
So amazing and believable. Love how well everything flowed and how in character both Shion and Nezumi was. It was so Shion to be all scientific about copulation. The ending was soo sweet.
Thanks for sharing.
AustinAttAcK chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
rfghiuwbfouwbvwouvbwodsubvod fujkbivuowsbdfucjkbkysdhjfbc stop.
yukio87 chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
Thank you for this apleasant moment that I had to read this
Aniki-xvi chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
Oooh! beautiful! I LOVE IT!
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